Linyang Zhang

@ellette-giselle

Thanks

@loopylin

Chase

Chase didn’t know what to think of the chaotic sight, so he stared with blank, black eyes, face half cast in shadow by his hoodie. “Why T-teach-er in t-tree?” A single flicker of purple came to Chase’s eyes, then died again.

@loopylin

Yeah, sorry.

Um, Chase would prefer puppy.

I’ll write a quick rp for him to get things moving along

He wasn’t as fearsome as she had pictured after the fight the previous night. Instead he seemed kind and gentle, more so than most other people she had met.

It’s funny to think of Chase as fearsome, he’s just so…not u…[Read more]

@loopylin

Nar: “Of course. You can never spend any amount of time in my profession without finding someone you couldn’t help.”

Wordy writing styles.

As Andrew can testify, more than once I have criticized books for wordy writing styles.

I’m not saying writers should state things as brief as possible, but writers shouldn’t take a paragraph and fill it with needless words. It bogs down the reader. There’s a balance between adding needless words and being too brief.

I think I did this with Silvanis…But I did punch him last night for no good reason so he might be pretty hostile so I’ll do…Nar I guess just cuz I was looking at an old drawing of her today

1. What is your full name?

“Narray Mae Nayhelm, but everyone usually calls me simply Nar.”

2. What is the most important thing the average person should…

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@loopylin

Aww Chase, you’re the best disney princess ever.

I have that meme you made a while back saved on the family computer.

Chase

Blue sprang into Chase’s eyes. “F-fawns fr-friends. I-I puh-tect lit-tle o-ones.”

My first written stories were about the tales I used to tell my little brother about a land called Nutmag (not Nutmeg, NutMAG huge difference, I know). It had talking animals and no humans. I even had a theme song for it that I’d sing before telling Ezra a story. I wrote at least three short stories only about two to three pages long. I still have…[Read more]

@loopylin

Chase

Chase looked at the floor, his eyes black. “Th-that’s sad. S-shall I in-intro-duce him s-sometime? A-all p-people should know f-fawns.” chase made a motion with his hand, as if petting some invisible animal.

@koshka

Okay, so my brain has been reading things with interesting twists to words. I literally just read that as “We’ve reached 500 papayas, guys.”

I almost choked on my yogurt XD

@loopylin

Chase

Chase was confused. Did she not know if this person was a friend or not? “D-does he l-like f-faw, fawwwns?” It was random, and not the best type of q…[Read more]

If I can, I will post my drawings today. I just have the 1 hour one left to do

@esther-c

Sorry, I don’t read Middle-grade fiction, so I won’t be much help

@loopylin

Chase

Chase hesitated. “I-I…” he fell silent, shaking his head. “N-no i-dea. W-who’s Lo-Lo-is?”

@loopylin

Chase

Chase got up, leaving his soda can beside where he was sitting. He retrieved Felicity’s can, planning to throw it away in the proper place later. He sat back down again.

“L-like s-sun…sat?” Chase was quiet and still for a moment, before turning to look at Felicity. He had formed his eyes into a reflection of a bright sunset.…[Read more]

@theducktator

First off, funny forum signature.

Second, what are the ages of your characters? because in my experience, different ages respond differently to death. Children (under 10 maybe?) usually know that death exists, but aren’t very afraid of it because they don’t understand. Adults, especially people in their 20s, and 40s, for whatever…[Read more]

@hybridlore

Yes, much better. My stomach ache went away in the night, and hasn’t come back yet. Still aren’t sure what exactly was going on.

Thank you to everyone who prayed for me!

@whalekeeper

cool!

“Aesthetic flowers” XD.

@liberty @koshka @elishavet-pidyon

You write animal stories, right? (If I tagged the wrong people by accident, sorry)

This seems like your forte.

@the_lost-journal

Totally okay!