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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's grief in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Oh, no! I completely understand how you feel @Northerner I do stuff like this all the time with school assignments, which, I can promise you, are just as aggravatingly heartbreaking to redo.
I know that the hardest part about redoing assignments can be doing them for the second time, but it sounds like what you were writing is definitely worth…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Finally working on my WIP, guys! @winter-rose @dragon-snapper @graciegirl @daeus
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Rolena Hatfield posted an update 9 years, 5 months ago
@kate-flournoy I had a writing break through thanks to your lovely advice!!! (which you probably don’t remember giving 😉 ) Lemme explain. A while ago I posted a scene from the beginning of my book and your critique was that the story didn’t flow quite right when I wrote like this… he said something, then did something, then did something then…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
I can’t do anything right now, but I’ll be on later to plan my WIP some more. @daeus
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Oh my goodness. That episode…
While watching that, I don’t think I was sad. I was upset that Moffatt would even think to torture me in such a way…
…and then, when it was all over, I cried. A little.
Which one was it that really made me cry…
Angels Take Manhattan, I think? The one where Amy and Rory…you know.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Cya ’round! @graciegirl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Yes, Sherlock. @hope
Oh my goodness. I can’t pick one.
For Ten, I really liked Donna.
For Eleven, I loved Amy.
For Twelve…well, Clara was and will always be my favorite companion for Twelve.Actually, Clara rivals Amy for my favorite companion in general…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
I knew there was a reason I didn’t like his character at first… @hope
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Aha. I see what you did there. @f5a8c3e92
Twelve definitely grew on me after awhile. I’m excited (and sad) to see what happens over the course of Season 10…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
That isn’t the word I’d use, but alright. I won’t argue with you (this time). *grins*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Ugh. Yes. Almost unbearably so. @gracie-girl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Oi, if you want to put up with Nine and Rose, that’s fine with me, you can have both of them. @hope
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
The “Impossible Girl” will probably have a different take on which Doctor to start with than I… @gracie-girl
@f5a8c3e92 Are you a fan of Twelve?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
*coughs* @hope See the explanation above.
Ten is great, don’t get me wrong. I don’t actually like Nine, but maybe that’s just me…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know. I blame Moffat… @hope
@gracie-girl Yep, Hope is definitely right. That’s why i suggested the Eleventh Doctor first. Nine and Ten can be cheesy, but Eleven is easier to bond with as a character.
I started off with Eleven, and by the time I got the the Doctor’s earlier incarnations, I was so in love with the show that I didn’t…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Um. It is. Definitely.
Fair warning, though, the seasons don’t run as a typical TV shows’ seasons do, they’re sectioned based on the actor playing the Doctor at the time.
I’d start with the Eleventh Doctor, Matt Smith’s version. He (technically) has 3 seasons: Season 5, Season 6, Season 7A, and Season 7B.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Me too! I prefer Doctor Who, but Sherlock is just SO. GOOD. @hope @f5a8c3e92 @gracie-girl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
There’s nothing wrong with bein a feeler @hope
But I’m with you on the sword thing… - Load More
@rolena-hatfield w… wow. *grins so wide she splits her face* That… makes me incredibly happy. You’re right. I did not even remember that. Congratulations. 😀 *returns flourishing bow* In my experience, truly strong prose is usually one of the last things to come… glad it’s clicking in place for you! 😀
@kate-flournoy Oh dear! *hands you some duck tape to fix the split in your face* I surely did not mean for that to happen 😀 I’m glad it’s clicking in place too! (at long last!!!!) One of those things that make you think… hmmm… I wished I’d learned this years ago.