Denali Christianson

@denali-christianson Heheh sci-fi in medieval fantasy is honestly better than regular ol’ medieval fantasy. It’s really quite overdone.

And yah I did ballet instead of figure skating but they’re kinda similar so yeah

@denali-christianson

AHH YOUR STORY SOUNDS AWESOME!!

*glances at broken…everything.*

And you’re welcome by the way! XD

Do not worry dear friend, I am not a Bumble! Whatever a Bumble is…

We really must figure this out… Hmm…

OOH CONFETTI *picks it up from floor and re-throws it.* NOICE!!

And OF COURSE you may use Anywhoodle. it’s a favorite…[Read more]

@denali-christianson

Actually that makes a ton of sense and I never thought of that!!! Thank you!! That actually helps quite a bit.

@denali-christianson

*peeks back in thru broken wall*

GAAAAAASHP.

You figure SKATE?!?!?!?!

That’s EPIC.

@denali-christianson

*drops through roof. Again. Don’t ask.*

WHY HELLO THERE!!!!

I can already tell from your witty introduction I shall like you! And yes, do ignore the bumbling henchman remark, though…I definitely was bumbling when I first joined…

Are I still bumbling??

Am I a Bumble??

What is a Bumble?

NEVERTHELESS!!!

I am Godly…[Read more]

@unsung

Since I can’t really figure out where to put it, I’m just going to rant about one of my projects here.

The first is just a fun story I’m working on with characters submitted by a bunch of people in another forum I’m on. It is set in a place called Bust, and has tons (200 actually marked down and used, but way more unexplored) of differe…[Read more]

@emilysf Ahhh gotcha. Ok so not sure I can help much but I do think the Wingfeather sag might help. So what happens in it isn’t like your story but it might help anyway I hope.

As for ur motive I mean I think it’ll be fine so long as u can write it well, that’s usually what it comes down to 😊

@Unsung

Thank you! I hope it stays that way when I am done writing it! What a coincidence!

It does sound meaningful? Good! 😅 Because that has become my greatest concern.

(I had a similar thought!) While MC’s death won’t spark a rebellion, it will cause much anger against him and he will be very painfully stripped of his gift (painful for him…[Read more]

@GodlyFantasy12

I’m not struggling with the death (that is set) but with why he dies.

I’m sorry it is so confusing. I was having a difficult time explaining it clearly.

I do plan on having the antagonist go through a redemption arc, if he can (I’m not completely sure if it is compatible with his character). He will be given a chance to redeem…[Read more]

Lol yes, @elanor, thank you again!

@emilysf Wow! This was absolutely riveting! And the plot you’ve crafted and woven sounds phenomenal. It’s a little funny too, because in the book I’m writing currently, My MC dies as well!

And as far as your questionings go, I would say that what you were thinking by the end of writing all that out (the idea of having the only way out as killing…[Read more]

@emilysf so I’ve actually started a page for character death discussions because I’m struggling with a character death myself.

I’m not entirely sure I can give much advice because….well just being honest I myself am a bit….confused if that makes sense. But some of that might be it is a LOT harder to explain your ideas on here then what they are…[Read more]

@everyone 🤣

Sigh….it’s….rough yall….

I’m also going to seek out some advice from my mom (she’s pretty great at this kinda stuff)

@elishavet-pidyon what you said really helps.

I wouldn’t be bringing the Charrie back because I wrote myself into a corner, and it wouldn’t be a “Deus Ex Machina” thing where like they’re all about to die and OH L…[Read more]

@faith-q

Well, I really haven’t been paying enough attention have I? I just saw this tag. =|

That sounds like a good start for a story, and is making ideas spring into my head. If written well it wouldn’t be cliche. It has some possibilities for a powerful storyline.

Random spark of ideas- What if this country is something like Israel under…[Read more]

You may not be having this problem anymore, but I thought I’d chip in my piece of advice.

Like someone mentioned before, I like to figure out generally how long something is going to be before putting a whole lot of effort into it. If something seems like a short story idea, I don’t put a whole lot of world building effort into writing it, eve…[Read more]

Tolkien’s world building is amazing, and most of the reason I like his books so much, and then Sam is just so endearing. (I do enjoy making people laugh. 😉)

Well, I may rant at some point, and it is nice to know that I will have a welcome ear, when I do. 🙂

I don’t know either, so I’m going to wait a little bit to see if anyone else knows the…[Read more]

lol I know a few people who are about the same level! I am not quite that much of a fan myself, but I have many friends who are! (Also the Chef’s kiss made me giggle 😉

Lol it’s alright! I’m not going to squeeze anything out of you! I just know that sometimes I just want someone to rant to aobut my writing stuff, but I don’t do it unless others…[Read more]

Where would I put a topic about my WIPs, should I put them all in one, or make one for each?