Denali Christianson

@freedomwriter76 thank u!!

@godlyfantasy12

You’re welcome! This is my favorite type of book research too, so thank you!

@koshka wow!! Thank you so much!!! That’s actually perfect and exactly how his scars are!! He does get pain actually from time to time and it directly correlates with pain that Corvina has in her hand sometimes.

Also, thank u for the info about his expressions and face muscles, didn’t even think about that! Also his sight…while his eye did escap…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Okkaaayyyy…*drags self back from hospital reports*

It looks like the wound is somewhat chronic, frozen in the stages just after bleeding, where the skin is sealed somewhat, but the wound is still open while no longer bleeding. which would make sense if it is painful from time to time. The magic would have to come in here as the…[Read more]

This sounds really neat!!! Could u give an example??

Anymore advice is still appreciated tho! Even for future reference lol!!! Cuz there’s conflict in…welp…all over the place in this series lol

It’s rlly funny how just typing it out and working thru it can help sooo much lol

@koshka ooh good question…

hmm…thinking about her right now…

(see…I have that “author” perspective where I see the character’s future self and how they are now XD) so in the future she’d be more up front and in control of her self, but right now, I believe she’s in such a state of turmoil in this scene that she’d lash out verbally.

But…due…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Ooo, wonderful tension! The things authors love to create yet struggle to write.

It sounds good so far; the emotions seem balanced to me.

How would Ara respond to November being hurt? How did she want to respond to Riven?

At this point it looks like she’s about to explode, which could manifest itself in various ways depending…[Read more]

it did the spacing weird. As in non-existent XD

“November!” Ara shifted as she fell, reaching to pull him down with her, but her fingers just brushed the edge of his shirt. Her back hit the floor and she gasped, the breath knocked from her lungs. Her body ached from the impact but she ignored it, scrambling to get to her feet.

Too late.

“No!” Ara reached for her friend, just as the bird’s…

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I can actually submit the scene if you’d like. Might be easier lol.

it’s short and it starts from where November is injured.

(Background Corvina can turn into a Raven at will, and November pushed Ara out of the way to take Corvinas blow)

And thank you!!

November, her and Corvina

It did thank u! @anatra23

and thx that would be very helpful @koshka I just knew I want it to still look about the same as when he received them (extremely dark red and still like jagged and such)

@freedomwriter76 ur tag kept glitching

@godlyfantasy12

I’ll need to check this, but it sounds like the wounds close up, but be scar tissue grows. Anyway I’ll be back on here once I’ve done some research.

@lydia-s

Ooo, here’s one I found recently.

http://www.users.totalise.co.uk/~leiafee/ramblings/realistic_injuries.htm