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Shaina replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@ariella-newheart Yours is absolutely hilarious, I love it!
@dekreel Thank you for the laughs, I loved those pictures!! And how long did it take you to find all of them anyway???
Guys, this is the best forum topic ever. Laughter is good medicine! *nods emphatically*
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel Hilarious.
😀
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Free verse Poem Advice/Critique in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
@gh24682468999 Wow! It’s beautiful! I don’t really know how to critique free verse, because most of my poems have pretty standard structure and rhyme. 😀 But I’ve attempted free verse a couple of times, and when I showed my mom, (who said she didn’t know how to critique free verse either) what she told me was to make it flow better, and that ac…[Read more]
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@ariella-newheart Accurate.
@dekreel Ok; not going to lie, that last pic of me kind of creeps me out…
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Ingrid replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel *wild applause*
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Ben Powell replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel And this is why KP is the bestest place on the Internet. Bravo.
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Grace H. started the topic Free verse Poem Advice/Critique in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
Hey everyone,
I wrote a poem today for my writing class, and its free verse, but sort of structured. Here are the first two stanzas:
What can ever substitute
for shushed hysterics in the wee hours of the morning
those conspiratorial smiles across the hallway
and those times when nothing need be said — the silence
only broken by taps and…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel, good work. 🙂 I like the small installments.
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Ariella Newheart started the topic Poems and Songs by Ariella in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
Hey, everyone! I’ve recently been writing a lot of poems, some to include in my WIP and some just for fun. 😉 I’d appreciate any thoughts. @dekreel @aislinn-mollisong @lady-iliara @0-0enyali0-0 @foreverme @anyone
One of my favorites which is sorta based on a Bible verse:
In A Mirror, Dimly
In a mirror, dimly,
The love of God revealed.
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Hi, I'm Ari! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@0-0enyali0-0 Hiiiiyaaa! Nice to see you!
(sorry in advance that my user-tag is super confusing to type, haha)
Yep, I noticed that it was quite creative xD No worries, I just copy and paste everyone’s user-tags, easy as that. 😉 It used to take my computer 2 minutes to load everything, too, but my dad mostly fixed it. I’m not exactly sure what he…[Read more]
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The fledgling Artist replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel OH! *smacks face against table* I always do that. My bad. I read it like 3 times and I was so confused! Thanks for pointing that out.
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Snapper started the topic Just a Bit… Dismal in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
Alrighty, guys…
I could use some help on this front. I’ve learned pretty well over the past few months how to show and not tell, but I actually am using that too much.
Don’t get me wrong. Always show over tell, but my problem is that I’m focusing way too much on the emotion. And Ike… Zelaya, they’ve all gone dismal.
How do I refocus my…[Read more]
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Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Readers' Corner in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
I’m rereading Resistance by Jaye L. Knight. Anyone else reading at the moment? 🙂 @dekreel @anyone
@sam-kowal @warrenluther04 I agree, Saphira is great. She’s definitely one of my favorites. x)
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WarrenLuther04 posted an update 8 years, 7 months ago
Looking for beta-readers:
@catwing @dekreel @dragon-snapper @rochellaine @jenwriter17 I’ve been working on a short story (fantasy) about Norse mythology and am almost done. I was wondering if any of you could beta-read it? *hides behind computer* How do you give someone beta-reading access? Do you just post a Google Doc link and give them Comment…[Read more]
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
“As a warning, I have a knack for melting chairs. Or else, why would you have a stool?”
😃😝
Most likely my favorite part. Hands (paws, 🐶) down!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel It was actually pretty well done. Since you’ve already had a lot of advice from others about story structure and characters, I’ll just note a couple of editing comments.
First of all, I think you need to do a little more research on helicopters. The first thing that struck me was the large size of the helicopters you were d…[Read more]
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GabbyJ replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
Thanks! 😀
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 7 months ago
@dragon-snapper @sage-g @dekreel @pretty-much-any-other-artists
I have a new character! It’s an elf from my new short story (WIP) called Ualair Fencaryn. He has mid-back (if that’s a word) long blond hair, green eyes, and sharp, angular eyebrows. He has a hawk-like, thin, angled face. He is thin but muscular. He usually wears a green-brown tunic…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel This is so cool!!! I love it ❤😉
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WarrenLuther04 replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@dekreel Phew! Thank goodness!
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@warrenluther04 Yes; just click the blue box at the top right corner of the google document that says “share” and you’ll get a link you can post on the forums. You can either allow comment access, or just let people view and then comment on the forum. Both ways have been done.
@rochellaine Thanks!
@warrenluther04 yeah I’d love to beta read for you!!! its been a long time since I read fantasy 🙂
@jenwriter17 Thanks! I’ll re-tag you on here when I post the link! 😀
Umm…and also it may be awhile until my story gets on here…. 😐😑😶 I’m having difficulties with Google Docs and the whole sharing thing…. (I am using a school email account and it isn’t letting me make a shareable link.)
Soooo….yeah. I’ll let you know when I get it up.
@jenwriter17
@warrenluther04 okay, no problem. 🙂 (sorry I don’t know anything about google docs to help)
@jenwriter17 Thanks! Sorry for making you wait…
Also, @skredder, would you mind beta-reading my story when I post it? Thanks!
Sure, I’d like to beta-read for you. 🙂
@skredder Thanks! I’ll notify you when I post it…which will hopefully be sometime fairly soon….