David B. Hunter

Jaclyn Fallows’ world has a history of turning upside down.

Like when she was suddenly able to create a small blue flame in the palm of her hand on her eighth birthday.  Or when she started having the same dream about the sister who vanished without a trace two years ago.

But now, at fifteen, Jaclyn is in for the biggest change of her life.  A m…[Read more]

@daeus  Thank you, thank you, thank you.  Wow, that flows so much better…I’m gonna rewrite it, using your tips.  🙂

I actually need to skedaddle myself…farewell!

(And to answer your question @shannon, I am not a “coffee hater” but I don’t drink coffee.  However, I absolutely adore coffee ice cream…especially Haagen Dazs.

Okay, I’m outta here.  😉

@audrey-caylin  Thank you so much!   Those are some great ideas.

@supermonkey42 @shannon @emily @daughteroftheking

Here is the new and (hopefully) improved version.

Fifteen-year-old Jaclyn Fallows’ world has been turned upside down—again.  That is about the only part of her miserable life she can understand.  The rest of it?  Not so much.  Sh…[Read more]

@shannon Howdy, friend!  *shovels ice cream into mouth*  *sighs happily*

@winter-rose  Substitute is the name.  🙂  I actually just posted the synopsis here if you want to read it.  🙂

What about you?

@winter-rose  Sorry, didn’t see your post until now.  I’m writing my WIP…sort of.  😉  I’m doing other things in between spurts of inspiration.

@emily  Byee!

@supermonkey42  Thanks for the feedback.  Ugh.  That grammar gets me every time.  🙂  And yeah, I thought about what you said about the whole other world thing, but it doesn’t give too too much away so I’m gonna keep it.  Thanks again!  🙂

@winter-rose  Here I am!  😉

@winter-rose  Party-crashers are always welcome.

@emily  Yes, the one I wrote the synopsis for.  😉  My goal is to finish the first draft by Christmas.

@shannon  Gotcha.  Thank you muchly, ma’am.

@emily  Yeah, I wondered about those parts…thanks for the feedback!

@daughteroftheking  *strokes chin*  Perhaps, child, perhaps. 😉

*flies in on a gravity-defying contraption not nearly as cool as @daughteroftheking‘s*

@emily  I’m sort of working on my WIP while doing other things… 🙂

@dragon-snapper @emily @shannon @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @daeus @anyone

@dragon-snapper Noice.  😉

@ethryndal  *wiggles eyebrows*  I wanna read it…although, I feel like I’ve just read the whole book.  😉  It is a tad too long, but that’s nothing a little editing can’t fix.  🙂