@daughteroftheking
Active 6 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Eccentric Mentor
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, I didn’t really like Justice in book one either because I felt like he was a robot. He didn’t feel very realistic to me except for him not wanting anyone to die. But even that was more like he didn’t want anyone else to die.
Oh good, I thought for sure I was going crazy with that thought
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, @rochellaine, doesn’t the song Proud of Your Boy from Aladdin kinda reflect both Justice and Zac during the bar fight? not completely, but somewhat?
(it probably doesn’t but I’m listening to that broadway right now and that song just came on and so that thought lept into my brain)
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, @rochellaine, I have to say, I liked Zac a lot better than Justice from the beginning. I mean, I knew he was going to turn out better, but even before he did I could see that he was acting the way he was as protection against getting hurt. Which made him opening up to Chessy so easily and quickly a bit confusing.
Justice was…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia Well, you see, she didn’t love Jonas as much as she loved Quillon. I love Jonas better than Quillon, and Zac better than Justice, but she’s chosen Quillon as her favorite, and none of the other men mean nearly as much to her as Quillon does.
I am in complete agreement with you, but if the author loves Quillon, the author must be allowed t…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice I have a confession. I didn’t actually cry at Zac’s death.
Partly it was because, like @alia said, I kept getting called away and when I finally got to the end I wasn’t immersed in the story as I should have been. The other reason was probably because I already knew he would die, and he died in the exact same way and sequence as Sy…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine, I don’t know. If she is willing to kill someone as wonderful as Jonas I think she is capable of anything…
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Hey, I’m here for a while. I’ll drop out in a bit for family worship, but I’m here now and I’ll be back after that. 😉 (Our guests left this morning…well, some of them… 😛 )
@alia Don’t worry, I doubt she’ll ever kill Quillon, Chessy, or Justice. Well, I’m not completely sure about Justice. 😛 She won’t kill Chessy bec…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, uh huh, I’m holding you to that
Thats what I thought. I actually can’t remember if you even showed us Jonas’ death scene of if we just found out when Chessy (or Justice) did.
Oh, and I would have cried, but every time I started getting emotionally involved I kept getting called away until the tears were gone.
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, Hey, I’m here for the moment. But I might be popping in and out. I’m about to go clean a bathroom.
oh, and really? Zac? let me guess, Quillon dies in book 3?
(Zac’s death was better than Jonas’ in my opinion with how it was written. it felt more personal)
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Alia posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
So I’m not quite sure where to share this, but I guess this will work.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15qXXuDlcATOMuOeglLrH6jK0RDXPbSIMEFHWir_IMJg/edit?usp=sharing
This is a doc I made with a character checklist. Feel free to copy it, add on, tweak, whatever.
@jenwriter17, @seekjustice, @ariel-ashira, @rochellaine, @valtmy, and whoever…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Guess What???? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice Thank you so much! haha, maybe I should’ve stuck with the steampunk identity 😛
@gh24682468999 sorry, yeah there were some problems on my end. glad it’s working now, and thank you! 😀
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17, okay, hopefully this weekend
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia sorry, I can’t write today 🙁 I might be on this weekend though, we’ll see…
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Guess What???? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@alia Thank you! I plan to make an official post Saturday.
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@seekjustice, @jenwriter17, @valtmy, @rochellaine anyone on?
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Alia replied to the topic Guess What???? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@jenwriter17, it looks great. can’t wait to see what you post
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Jenna Terese posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
@dekreel just letting you know that I did draw your character, I’m just having problems uploading pictures right now. I’ll post the pic as soon as I can. 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Guess What???? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@kaya-young Aw, thank you! <3 😀
my site was hosted by Bluehost, but I made it through WordPress.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Guess What???? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@gh24682468999 Oh really? It’s not supposed to say that…
can you just try typing http://www.jennaterese.com into your search engine? not sure why it’s saying that…
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Jenna Terese started the topic Guess What???? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I’m just gonna come right out and say it…
I HAVE A WEBSITE!
I just finished it last night and here it is if y’all want to check it out
I don’t have any blog posts up yet (I will later today). Let me know if you see anything that needs improving, or if there’s anything wrong with the site. Oh, and the contact form…[Read more]
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@alia This is cool! Are we allowed to print it off and use it for our own characters?
@jenwriter17, yep go ahead. I put it here so y’all could have access to it and use it however you want
@alia thanks! 🙂
@jenwriter17, yep, no problem