Daniel Thompson

Hey, y’all. I’ll be writing for a bit if anyone wants to join.

@hope It seems that you have two character arcs in your story. One, a positive arc on trust. Two, a disillusionment about the sureness of temporal victory. There might be a third one around responsibility (her growing to consider herself responsible for more than just those she loves), but I doubt it because she doesn’t seem to change in that…[Read more]

@Aratrea The second experiment in living is built off the first. In the first, victory is merely defined by keeping everyone she loves safe. In the second, she has added an element of physical freedom and the overthrow of tyranny as qualifications for victory because she is convinced that the original goal of safety for those she loves will never…[Read more]

@Aratrea The second experiment in living is built off the first. In the first, victory is merely defined by keeping everyone safe. In the second, she has added an element of physical freedom and the overthrow of tyranny as qualifications for victory because she is convinced that the original goal of safety for those she loves will never come…[Read more]

@Aratrea

This is the protagonist of a trilogy. She goes through a disillusionment arc through the first two books, then has a positive arc in the final book. I’ve done some major work on her arcs recently, but some points might still need to be straightened out.

Beginning: Protagonist starts by believing that good will always win and victory…[Read more]

Though not dramatic enough for most books, a series of teaching and reasoning can change people. Generally, I’ve found that a repetition of pounding the same point home in different ways, by different people, and being able to see the logical reasons for why I should change as well as the threat of the results if I do not change, can cause a…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper I’ll be editing tonight.

@northerner Sweet-o. I got about two and a quarter chapters edited.

@northerner Sweet. You’re on.

@dragon-snapper @winter-rose @anyone-else I’ll be editing for an hour.

@kate-flournoy Sure thing.

@kate-flournoy Ok, maybe I’ll look it up myself. Btw, did you take the enneagram test with instinctual variant? I found that more interesting than the normal test actually.

@kate-flournoy What are the shadow functions? Does that have anything to do with type 2?

I do believe MBTI explains how you act when stressed as well.

@anna-brie Authority sounds good.

@anna-brie I’m guessing that your two themes are government and mercy.

@Graciegirl Ha! Those are both me to a T. Or is it Tee? Or Tea? I don’t know. *sips tea*

Man, now I have to go back and retake the test so I can look at those wing things.

Oh… Ok. I think I got individualist and helper as strong runner ups. It said my wings were well balanced. Does that mean I’m a fair mixture of personalities?

@aratrea What do the wings mean anyways?

@kate-flournoy Yeah, I’m not planning to change anything.