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Daeus replied to the topic Let's talk about Jean Valjean. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@his-instrument Edward III claimed to be king of France and began the hundred year’s war in…1347.
Is that right?
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus I like it! As Kate says… you were born to sell things. Writing about my book is one of my least favorite things. Can’t just writing the thing be enough? As for bittersweet, I looked it up int a thesaurus and it gave me poignant, nostalgic, affecting, touching, and sentimental. Not sure if any of those fit, but…
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Daeus replied to the topic Let's talk about Jean Valjean. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@his-instrument Well, if you got me started on them I bet I could remember the rest.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@his-instrument The Princess Bride! 😀 Fezzic to Westley.
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Daeus replied to the topic Let's talk about Jean Valjean. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@his-instrument. Oh, you did classical conversations? That’s neat. I was in it from 8-17.
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Daeus replied to the topic Let's talk about Jean Valjean. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@kate-flournoy *GASP!* You can’t be a true Les Mis fan if you haven’t read about the sewers!
Yeah. Sure. Whatever. It’s still one of my favorites, so I can forgive you. Actually, you’re totally and 100% right, I’m just righter.
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Daeus replied to the topic Let's talk about Jean Valjean. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@his-instrument Why rewrite the musical. It’s great the way it is.
Er, yeah, let’s see. I’d pretty much agree. I do think Hugo should have cut down on some of his fluff, but the vast majority of it was great. I have some slightly different personal opinions, such I don’t think I liked Eponine quite that much and Javert’s only in the top five or…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@emma-flournoy Thanks, but I don’t really want the meaning of yearning, I want the feel it gives you. That emotional code imprinted on it.
@graciegirl Thanks. Btw, The Count of Monte Cristo is my all time favorite novel and A Tale of Two Cities is my second favorite.
The crocodile toe–I was just trying to sell one to Kate. …Though I don’t…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@emma-flournoy Yeah, I have them italicized where I wrote them, but copying and pasting it here apparently stripped it of its formatting.
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@northerner Read it like, “confront everything he fights for being shattered.” I think most people have been fine with the wording, though a few have been confused by it. I don’t know. I’ll consider possibly changing it.
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@northerner Good points.
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Daeus replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@kate-flournoy Hehe. Thanks. Would you like a crocodile toenail? Just looking at those things whisks you off into a land where the trees rocket into the firmament and the eternal marshlands teem with the untold tales of a thousand deeds the murk has hidden from our annals of history. If I had half a brain I’d charge you $300, but because you’re my…[Read more]
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Daeus started the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
Hi Everyone,
I’m working on my book description now and would like your opinion. The first paragraph is one I wrote a while ago and feel settled on, so I don’t think I’ll change anything there unless there’s a glaring error, but the second part is what I’d particularly like your help on. And…*controls explosive laughter* I totally flattered…[Read more]
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Daeus started the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
Hi Everyone,
I’m working on my book description now and would like your opinion. The first paragraph is one I wrote a while ago and feel settled on, so I don’t think I’ll change anything there unless there’s a glaring error, but the second part is what I’d particularly like your help on. And…*controls explosive laughter* I totally flattered…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
Alright. I’m signing out. Thanks for writing everyone!
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@dragon-snapper @graciegirl @winter-rose I’ll be working on my book description. Don’t know how long it will take, but I’ll probably be at least a half hour.
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Daeus replied to the topic Call for beta readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
That’s probably about 200 normal book pages, I think.
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Daeus replied to the topic Call for beta readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@northerner Ah, I wish I could. Keep me in mind for the future since I always love beta reading, but at the moment I’m afraid I can’t add any more to my plate. 🙁
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@graciegirl Most of us are in EST, but we are spread across the globe. Just include your time zone in your post, and you should be fine.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@gracie-girl Most of us are in EST, but we are spread across the globe. Just include your time zone in your post, and you should be fine.
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