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Daeus replied to the topic What Villains Would I Use for This Story? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago
@warrenluther04 I’m not sure. The idea just came to me that monkeys have a lot of skills that would make them good villains.
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Daeus replied to the topic Way too many cliches in one place in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
It always helps the story when the land is more interesting than the MC.
I wish I had come up with that line.
@graciegirl I loooooooovvvve frozen blueberries.
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Daeus replied to the topic Way too many cliches in one place in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@hope Well, it could work, but just remember to keep the woman flat.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic I'm concerned my story is a bad allegory in the forum Fantasy 7 years, 3 months ago
What everyone else said. I think switching names and such from the common terminology is cool. That being said, I have the Prince and Followers in one of my own books. But the religion is a backdrop for another theme and not a great part of the plot in and of itself. It depends a lot on your angle and point of your story. The larger a part…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Way too many cliches in one place in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
This is hilarious. And the dramatic fainting… XD
As for renaming my MC in each book, that is a great idea. *nods* I shall have to remember that. Does it work even if the MC is a woman?
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Daeus replied to the topic Way too many cliches in one place in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@jess Thursday or Friday. I have another one planned.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hi, Members of This Kingdom! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@celticcailin Hi! Thanks for leaping out into the spotlight for us.
So how’d you find Kingdom Pen? If you like reading Christian fantasy, do you write it too?
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Daeus replied to the topic What Villains Would I Use for This Story? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago
Monkeys?
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Daeus replied to the topic Help! Too Many Ideas in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago
@joy Well, let’s disregard thematic depth then because that can be fixed. In that case, Queen of Thorns or Aethra Falls seem like the two best options.
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Daeus replied to the topic Help! Too Many Ideas in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago
@joy I can see why you’re torn. Those all sound like great ideas, only the second one is a little scattered in that I don’t see how it all connects as well as with the others. I probably have a tie between 1 and 3, with four sounding great too.
I’ll just offer a few questions that might help you pick one idea to go forward with.
1. Which idea do…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Way too many cliches in one place in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 3 months ago
@emma-flournoy Henty is the worst, but Arthur Conan Doyle was high in mind too. Though I do like Doyle actually.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
…..weird…
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 No, I don’t know if it can be changed. It’s possible @rolena-hatfield might be able to change it though.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@joy Not quite. Click the blue text below a person’s profile picture (it’s their name). On that new page, right next to their profile picture, is their tag.
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Daeus replied to the topic I'm concerned my story is a bad allegory in the forum Fantasy 7 years, 3 months ago
@allison-grace It’s possible you might want to change some things. I can’t say for sure.
I’ll just give some general thoughts on allegory. The main point of allegory is to get us to view something we already know about with a fresh mind. Because of this, your allegory shouldn’t be immediately obvious or predictable. This doesn’t mean that we…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@joy Yep, this is a great place for that type of thing.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet, @joy!
You’re the second person to join the forum because they found us through Pinterest. I guess that social media stuff works. 😛
Do you have a book you’re working on at the moment?
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 3 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien I can only say hello, goodbye, and MacDonalds….
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings and Salutations Fellow Wordsmiths in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@koryn-koch Welcome to your bestistest place on the internet. Is your name pronounced Core-in? It sounds nice and crunchy. 😀
If you do get a chance, A Tale of Two Cities is my second favorite book. The Count of Monte Cristo is the first.
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Daeus replied to the topic Greetings and Salutations Fellow Wordsmiths in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 3 months ago
@koryn-konch Welcome to your bestistest place on the internet. Is your name pronounced Core-in? It sounds nice and crunchy. 😀
If you do get a chance, A Tale of Two Cities is my second favorite book. The Count of Monte Cristo is the first.
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