Daniel Thompson

I agree with getting your name the same color as the title. And I think the fonts should match better. Your name isn’t going to be fancy like the title, but they just seem mismatched right now. It would be cool if the pattern thing could be a symbol from the book, but I’m not sure if there are any overt symbols in your book…

And one picky…[Read more]

Any critique I have has already been mentioned. I like it. 🙂

Aha! It worked.

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.

http://www.thescratchingquill.com/fairwin-option1/

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.

Oh, by the way, the image isn’t the full resolution it will be and the clearish lines and stuff will be removed when the design is done.

If anyone’s still out there, I’m going for another hour

And now I’m taking another break, but I’ll be back for more.

@jess @winter-rose I’m back for another hour.

Alright. I’m gonna take a break now, but I’ll be back. I proofread something like four chapters.

@aella @winter-rose Ok, I’m back. I think I’ll try to go for an hour without breaking.

@aella I’m just finishing over here, but I’ll be back in about an hour or so and then I’ll keep going for a couple hours.

@kate-flournoy Glad you liked it.

Ok, @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @dragon-snapper @ingrid @hope @jess @mark-kamibaya @his-instrument @anyone-else

Here’s take three. Tell me what you think.

Matthew is sworn to avenge a murder. His dedication to his wronged family is powerful enough to bring him through any trial, but his youth and inexperience hold him back. Setting out to find…[Read more]

@Audrey-Caylin Awesome you showed up. (Though we don’t give trophies for that. I’m sure you’re fine without one.) And I have to be the first to welcome you to the bestistest place on the internet.

I know what you mean how the articles seem a little anti explicit Christianity in fiction. I’m pretty sure that wasn’t the authors’ intents, but…[Read more]

I don’t know, you do it @kate-flournoy. I only come up with the ideas.