@dancefree7
Active 8 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Haha! I like them both @kate-flournoy and at @gretald!
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Greta replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Oh dear, @kate-flournoy! Since your’s is after mine, the next person writing can just go off of your’s. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Ooooooooops… we were posting at the same time @gretald!
What do we do now… 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
I groan and thrust nervous fingers up through my hair, clasping my head and shaking it violently. “Not. Funny!” I snap.
He holds up his hands in surprised apology. “I found it rather endearing, actually— you used to do that all the time when we were kids.”
Tears of frustration sting my eyes, and I turn away to hide them. No sense in letting him…[Read more] -
Greta replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
What was this guy’s problem? All I wanted was answers to my questions. I’d only just lost all my memories, and he wasn’t even a little sympathetic.
“You know, I’m getting sick of your evasiveness. Thou art–” I cover my mouth. Where was the Old English coming from?
Gavin smirks at me. “Fairytales aren’t real, eh? Just watch and see.”
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Crossing my arms, I narrowed my eyes at Gavin. Trying to get information out of this guy was like trying to drag a pig out of his mud wallow. Not easy.
And he said we had been good friends. I wondered if he had been like this before in our friendship and how I had reacted to his cryptic”ness”?
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Crossing my arms, I narrowed my eyes at Gavin. Trying to get information out of this guy was like trying to drag a pig out of his mud wallow. Not easy. And he said we had been good friends? I wondered if he had been like this before in our friendship and how I had reacted to his cryptic”ness”.
Since he still hadn’t responded with any further…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
I could do it tomorrow anywhere from 1:30-3:30 pm EST.
@daeus We will still be asleep then, if I have figured this out right. Your 1:00pm will be our 4:00am. I know, we sleep sooooo late. 😀 So I guess for us Aussies, we’ll just have to play it be ear and see if anyone is awake when we are. (*Bother different time zones*)
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Oh and one other thing, when you post something, look at the time. That is American not ours. See my last post was 10:25pm yet it is 1:26pm our time.
@daeus, I don’t know how you’re still awake?!? I so need sleep. (I love sleeping in… 🙂 ) -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@anna-brie How about we start at 2:00pm (aus) 😛
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Ok @anna-brie and @Bluejay, this should clear it up.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
I’ll be asleep unfortunately. I’ll have to study the Australian time zone(s) tomorrow to figure out how you Aussies and I can work together on this.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
I could do it tomorrow anywhere from 1:30-3:30 pm EST.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
No problem at all. We can try tomorrow. (Sleep well tonight. 😀 )
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Daeus replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
@bluejay I’d imagine a caricatured somewhat elongated fellow leaning over another guy with one fist on his collar and the other fist raised. I’d have him staring into the other guy’s face with a smug investigative expression accompanied by a squarish scowl. You know, with one eyebrow up questioningly and the other sharply down in an angry look.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea If you have the time, I’ve love your feedback with the rest of the story. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Battle Power in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 6 months ago
This just keeps making me think of Prince Caspian and the underground fight. That scene is done so well, with Caspian and Peter counting. Maybe there is something there that will help.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Limericks in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
There once was a lizard called Ted.
Who lived in an old tin shed.
His head was dark blue,
And his tail was too,
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BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
“Wren?” I was stunned. “Wren, like the bird?”
“Yes.”
“Oh.” I thought I might have had a better name then that. Still I can vaguely remember liking it.
“Dad use to called me his Jenny Wren,” I cry, triumphantly.
Gavin nods and smiles.
“I’m starting to remember,” I crow.
“Good,” said Gavin.
“Now what?” I ask.
Gavin looks at me.
“What? Am I suppose…[Read more] - Load More
