Hannah Whatley

How about:
Sarah’s Staccato Notes
Noted Staccatos
Notes of Staccato
Spradlin’s Staccato Notes
Super Staccato Notes
Any of these feeling a bit better? :}

Sweet Staccatos?
I think Staccato Notes would work well too. 😛

So let’s get some guys onto this topic. *Stares hard at them* I’m stuck. 🙁 And I’m dying to find out how my story ends. HELP!!

@aratrea
@dbhgodreigns
@lightningmouse
@levipierpont
@markmcguire
@daniel-leinad-thompson-2-2-2
@reaganramm
@warrioroftherealm

Whoa! I LOVE that idea. @spradlin. I love sing Staccato. It is really fun and uses a lot of tummy muscles. Do you sing? I do. I’m in the soprano range which is very special. (I just have to remember to practise.)

Hey, who says you can’t be willing to die for frozen raspberries @Daeus!?!? Why else do you think they say ‘to die for’?

😛

@spradlin

Sticky Notes.
Notes of Harmony
Whole Notes
Notes from a Composer
(So those above involve music. I’ll see if I can think of some different ones later) 😀

No. Re-phrase it should be nearly 8pm not 7pm.

@daeus It’s tomorrow. 😀 No, it really is. Even though the time has flown by, it is definitely tomorrow. Plus we have just end day light savings. (Or started. I’m not sure which one.) So when I post this it should be nearly 7pm over there.

Hm, yes @spradlin… though that might more denote (get it? Denote? *sigh* Okay, that was really bad) a… community for sharing noteworthy thoughts than a blog of just one person’s noteworthy thoughts.

I don’t know… thoughts?

Yes. I did just use ‘thoughts’ way too many times in one paragraph.

Ah— gotcha @Daeus. Thanks so much.

Yes, I know what you mean… it’s funny, but I’ve tried over and over and over to poeticize (like my made up word? 😛 ) about an object, but for some reason I can only do it about really deep thoughts. Concepts, if you will. Like with this one, I wanted to take the word ‘love’, which is so commonly misused…[Read more]

WAIT WHAT NO @SPRADLIN REALLY??? I can’t imagine why… 😛

@kate-flournoy Is toil a one syllable word? Well then, I suppose I meant use a softer word.

What I meant by “replacing ‘cruel’ with ‘and’…” is basically, “The winds of age and fate and fill in the blank together racked and shook him.”

I think part of my problem with long poems is what my poems are about. They tend to be about objects, or though…[Read more]

Eh… that might be a bit of a reach. 😉

Let’s see. *waits for bolts of inspiration from the blue*

*still waits for bolts of inspiration from the blue*

*continues to wait for bolts of inspiration from the blue*

*concludes that there is no such thing as a bolt from the blue, and as for inspiration, it is a fallacious fairytale our teachers…[Read more]

We were posting at the same time @spradlin! 😀

Thanks for the pointers— I can see how that would be a problem, definitely. Would it work, do you think, to cut each line in half, where most of them have a slant rhyme with the middle of the prior line?

Thanks, @Daeus and @faithdk!

Couple questions, Daeus… ‘toil’ is a one syllable word. ???
Also, I’m not quite sure what you meant about replacing ‘cruel’ with ‘and’… I can’t seem to grasp what specific changes you were getting at.
And… oh yeah. Oops. He did lose his shield, didn’t he? *gulp* Man, that’s embarrassing. 😛
All your other…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy

First of all, let me just repeat that this is a great poem – not to mention long, which I is something I can never manage.

Also first of all, make sure all your lines have a capital first letter.

Now for the many other first of alls:

but he never once forsook the field; forsook the toil or tears.

Replace “toil” with a one…[Read more]

There was a thread on this a while ago. You can check it out below. Mine’s on there though I still haven’t decided whether it is actually a blog or not. https://kingdompen.org/forums/topic/any-bloggers-out-there/

Oh, and @overcomer… 😛 😉