@dancefree7
Active 8 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Daeus replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay Is it a thinking cat? Might it have got another pet that could help it escape to form a plot with her?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@DAEUS NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! NOT THAT AGAIN!!!! WHAT ON EARTH WERE YOU DOING TOUCHING THE PAPER? AFRAID I WOULDN’T GIVE IT BACK TO YOU OR SOMETHING???
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Daeus replied to the topic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
AAAAAHH! My hand! Watch where you slam things @kate-flournoy.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Heeheehee… nice @hannah-c. Very nice. Very happy to be of service. 😀
Ahem… because I’m picky, let me improve on your second example a bit…
“Guru approved!” Kate slammed the stamp down on the paper, grimacing as a nearby inkwell skittered across the table with the impact and crashed to the floor.’
😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Hm… is it an old house? The cat could slip down a loose grate into the basement and worm its way out from there… or it could squeeze through a mouse hole (a large one, obviously! 😛 ). Or maybe there was a hole in the screen door, and the outer door wasn’t shut properly… Or it could find its way up into the attic and somehow wriggle out a…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
HELP! @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @faithdk, @anna-brie, @rolena-hatfield, @vanna, @sarah-h, @ivy-rose, @hope, @writefury, @anyone!!!!!
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Daeus replied to the topic Reactions in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Good example @hannah-c. Kate’s approval showed us a little about her, but her stamping showed us more.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@adry_grace The trouble is the family doesn’t leave. There is no mention of it. It is night time and their all tired, so I guessing they’d just go to bed.
I’ve been trying to think all night, but every time I come up with an idea, I end up knocking it back. 😛 -
Daeus replied to the topic How has your character changed? in the forum Characters 10 years, 5 months ago
@vanna Well, I’m actually on the third to last chapter. I’m hoping I can finish it and give it the first round of editing by sometime in July then tidy it up some more and hopefully get it published before the end of the year.
The complicated plot has been – well, complicated, but it can be good to stretch yourself.
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BlueJay started the topic Newsflash: Missing Cat, but how did it escape? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Ok this is really embarrassing but I’ve got a major problem. I’m writing a story about a cat who gets lost. The family have just moved in to their new house, so it’s not unusual for a cat to go missing. They tend to try to get back to the old house. Don’t ask me why, but they do. *it’s a cat thing* But how did she get out of the house? She had…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus drat. I thought I was going to be the first in human history to be teleported through the internet.
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Daeus replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@kate-flournoy No, I think it only works if you press command T. Try getting a mac.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
*stares contemplatively at post, drops eyes to keyboard* Hm… let’s see… *tentatively presses Ctrl, squeezes eyes shut and jabs T with index finger*
Am I teleported yet???!
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Will be writing for about an hour. Tag me if you can join in.
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Daeus replied to the topic How has your character changed? in the forum Characters 10 years, 5 months ago
@vanna Yeah, I just wish all my characters could be that unique. The books called Edwin Brook – That’s my MC’s name. It’s got a deep plot. I probably bit off more than I could chew when I started, but I think I can handle it now.
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Daeus replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@the-happy-bookaholic What in the world is forum shiping? Don’t tell me technology is now allowing teleportation via the-the internet?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@the-happy-bookaholic I’m not one hundred percent sure I quite got what you meant there, but it made me laugh so hard… 😀
And now that you mention it, she did use speaker tags quite well. Good for her— do I see a future authoress??? 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Story by a Seven Year Old in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
@thehappybookaholic I’m not one hundred percent sure I quite got what you meant there, but it made me laugh so hard… 😀
And now that you mention it, she did use speaker tags quite well. Good for her— do I see a future authoress??? 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know if you’ve even read my two messages above, but I actually can’t write today. Tomorrow I should be able to though. Sorry about that. @anna-brie
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@anna-brie Or 2:30-3:00? 🙂 🙂 🙂
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