@dancefree7
Active 8 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Book? in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@Dekreel ooh, Night! That is one powerful little book.
For myself… Les Miserables, The Lord of the Rings, Fahrenheit 451, A Tale of Two Cities, The Count of Monte Cristo, A Christmas Carol, Lord of the Flies, the Mistborn Trilogy, The Roman-Britain Trilogy, The Red Keep… and the list goes on. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Ingridrd ooh, I’m getting strong velveteen rabbit/toy story vibes. 😀 I love the open end though; there’s still hope. 😉
And… believe it or not I really don’t have any criticism. It’s adorable. It made me feel guilty about my stuffed leopard that I haven’t talked to in ages. And it has that sweet, half-wistful tone of all stories told from the…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@ingridrd I want that on my wall!
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Yeah. I knew it was in editing mode. I left it that way because sometimes people like to leave long comments at the end of a story. Suggesting mode is much better for editing in general though. You can switch it to suggesting mode whenever you like.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Yes, I think I sent you an email, but if you didn’t get it, you can access it here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/16ycjr6zOnxjAtIpSkMQ6SDkHKlg5iX3oMfA9aHpUD7I/edit?usp=sharing
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic SO…I need some advice in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel same. I know it’s a classic but I’ve never read it. 🙁
But as far as unique and compelling stories go… when you think about it, all stories are pretty much a mash-up of the same storylines being used over and over again. What makes them their own is what the author uses them to say. When a new voice picks up an old story, new depths…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@emma-flournoy Yep, the 3rd person one.
@graciegirl Well, cool. 🙂 I’ll send you the doc.
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Daeus replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@epicaddie2 Yep. I would also direct you here: https://kingdompen.org/category/articles/worldbuilding/
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Daeus replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@epicaddie2 I’m working through this myself at the moment, but I do have one or two things to say.
First, you want to develop your world well before you start writing. Sure, you should only spend so much time building your story world. You have to start eventually, but spending a whole month world building would not be unreasonable. A good…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 6 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 😂 😂 😂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 a girl after my own heart. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 good thoughts. I played around a lot with government and where it fits in, but it was so equally part of all four of the pillars I couldn’t bring myself to make it its own separate one. 😛
It’s probably the most perfect manifestation of a country’s EiL within itself, whereas Economy is a further exploration of that outside of…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@epicaddie2 Ooooh I was talking about this a while back… let me go copy and paste my emails… XD
It’s a fairly simple thing, but once you delve into it there’s a lot to work with.
Basically, I came up with four pillars I think every culture is built on.1. History
2. Religion
3. Geography
4. EconomyIn that order. History and Religion…
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@jadamae Great! Just contact me through the link I posted earlier and I’ll get it to you.
@salome01w4g The google doc would be fine.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Great. That’s a very good discipline to have. If you want to sign up, just contact me through the link I provided earlier on in this thread.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@jess-penrose That would be great. Yep, basically what you did before.
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
*dies*
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel Welcome! I’m glad you finally made your way to the forum. It’s a cool place. Elizabeth was so nice to summon me over here because I too am a fan of Wingfeather. Have you read The Wingfeather Tales? That’s probably my favorite because almost all of my favorite authors are in one place. Have you read any of Andrew Peterson’s brother’s or…[Read more]
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