Hannah Whatley

All right, @Daeus and @kate-flournoy. I’ve edited some. It’s still not quite done, but if you have time, would you mind reading it through? If you don’t have time, that’s perfectly fine.
@kate-flournoy, Is the showing vs. telling problem better? *looks hopeful*

The day of my thirteenth birthday I met my true love. I invited my entire…

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@Daeus oh! Now I get it— very clever. 😀

No, really.

My fault I didn’t get it at first. 😉 My head must be screwed on front-ways for once, making my brain very sluggish. *chuckles*

@Daeus oh! Now I get it— very clever. 😀

No, really.

My fault I didn’t get it. 😉 My head must be screwed on front-ways for once, making my brain very sluggish. *chuckles*

@kate-flournoy

dancing=cordination
blind=without thought
Ya ain’t got feet, you’re gonna trip and fall
So we use metres instead of feet (Brittish thing to do)
Meter=rythme – what you were talking about

Heh

Heh heh

humph

… yeah *groans*

@Daeus… what?

@Daeus what?

@kate-flournoy Quite neat. It’s like blind dancing, only without the feet.

We’re so Brittish we use meters instead.

I just realized we both switched meter in those last two verses… It’s neat how we do that without even realizing, isn’t it?

@Daeus

And then we have knightings,
And sparrings with words,
Though sometimes those sparrings
Grow rather absurd.

@bluejay get over here, we’re ruining your topic. 😀

@kate-flournoy

First we ate ice cream
Then cookies then candy
Now we eat mangos
Oh, boy! They are dandy

First we ate ice cream
Then cookies then candy
Now we eat mangos
Oh, boy! They are dandy

@Daeus

*urgggggghhhh* *facepalm*
Either you deliberately misconstrue my words, or my computer does.

No prizes for guessing which. 😉

‘I hammered into Google
‘Christian writing teens’;
It brought me to this awesome site—
The website of my dreams.

Excitedly I clicked the link,
And had a look around.
I eagerly perused the forum
And squealed at what…

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Mangos are perfect! I totally agree.

@hannah-c That’s great. I’m glad this worked out for you.

Per-fect-o-mungo.

Yes. That is a word.

How about this?

I made myself a member
Without a second thought
Sometimes that ends in trouble
But this time it did not

@hannah-c Well I was writing for 45 minutes, but I got 389.

… Not very good really, but I regard anything as better than nothing.

@hannah-c Oh, I missed you. Feel free to tag me whenever you do this cause I’m normally open. It looks like you started 15 minutes ago. Well, I’ve been writing for a half an hour, so I’ll just keep going 15 minutes more.

Ah yes. Writing. I need to do that. Anybody up for an hour or so?

@hannah-c, were you wanting to do it at this time, or was it some other time?