@dancefree7
Active 8 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 10 years, 4 months ago
This. Is. Hilarious. I honestly can’t think of much I would change— the dry, matter-of-fact, world-wise and patiently weary voice of the narrator is perfect for showcasing what kind of world they live in, the wry humor is fantastic, and as an avid student of English history I can totally appreciate everything you said about royalty! 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writing Course in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
Wow, looks like characterization is stealing the show! 😀
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Kate Flournoy posted an update 10 years, 4 months ago
Aaaaaand I’m going to be gone again, this time for approximately a week. So if you tag me and I don’t answer, don’t worry. I haven’t been swallowed up by an earthquake or anything. 😉 Bye!
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Writing Game in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
“Two o’clock. Time to sleep.”
“I agree.”
“Goodnight.”
Three scaly dragon lay down on the paved floor and started to snore. All of a suddenly a screech filled the air. The three dragons leaped a mile into the air and crashed into the ceiling of their basement. They banged back onto the ground and looked around dazed.
“What was that?”
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BlueJay started the topic Art Competition in the forum Art 10 years, 4 months ago
Hey all you artists out there…
An American author, Chuck Black, is holding a competition. It’s both art and movie. You can view the details here with this link.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
I was wondering where you were @daeus. That’s okay. I’ll see you Monday then. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
@bluejay, @hannah-c, @kate-flournoy Sorry I missed it tonight. I’m going to be busy for the next two days, but should be back on Monday.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
Yes that’s it. Well, I got 752 words. How’d you go?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
Yes that’s it. Well, I got 752 words. How’d you go?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
@hannah-c What do you dial when you want the fire brigade?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
Yippee! I’ll be going to 9. @hannah-c
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
I’m starting ten minute early so tag me if you can join me now. 🙂 @daeus @kate-flournoy @hannah-c
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Greta replied to the topic Writing Course in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
@reaganramm Ooo, that’s so hard! I would probably choose a course on characterization, plotting, world-building, or showing vs. telling.
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Christine Eaton replied to the topic Writing Course in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
@reaganramm I could benefit from a class teaching methods and ideas of ways to stay motivated in my writing and editing.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Next Four Years in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
@the-happy-bookaholic Yes, we have many political parties and you can vote for any of them. It’s just that only the democrats or republicans ever win (except maybe in a few very small government positions). You can also vote for whoever you want. Santa Clause gets a couple votes every year. It would be a huge constitutional crisis if he ever won. 😉
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writing Course in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
Dialog for definite. 🙂 My conversations never sound that real. *They sound more like they are in a book rather than really life* 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writing Course in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
Dialog for definite. 🙂 My conversations never sound that real. *They sound more like they are in a book rather than really life* 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writing Course in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
Urgh… yikes, that’s a difficult question. Probably characterization— I don’t struggle with that, but it’s one of those things I feel like I can never study enough of or understand as fully as I should. There’s just so much to learn!
Um… other than that… let’s see… novel structure? Character arcs? (Or would that be in with…[Read more] -
Daeus replied to the topic Writing Course in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
Oh boy, I struggle with a lot of little things. Like, writing fluid prose, mastering emotion, getting the sense of timing just right, not being too choppy, picking the right tense, etc.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 4 months ago
597. @daeus Not bad, but not great. Feeling pretty down *sick* today, so my brain and fingers where much slower than normal.
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Have fun @kate-flournoy! 😀
Nooooo! Not you, Kate! What am I going to do? :'( *Imagines terribly boring, Kate Flournoy-less week*