Hannah Whatley

Well @his-instrument, I guess just simple tunes. Mostly along the lines of traditional Celtic/Irish/Scottish music— something I can just improvise on my harp, and never remember afterward. 😉 I’ve been playing the harp for… uh… maybe three years now? Possibly?
I’ve been taking a break from it lately due to hearing complications, but once we…[Read more]

Something else I just thought of @Daeus… I don’t know if it adds anything to the discussion, but it may help clarify it a bit.
First, a plot twist is anything that changes the direction the story will take from here on out. Duh. How obvious.
But that means it doesn’t just have to be characters who drive them, though I usually think in that…[Read more]

Hey, good point @Daeus. I hadn’t thought of that. But you’re right. Wow. I’ll have to remember that.

Hey, if anyone writes in the afternoon, I’m doing some editing now.

Ok, and we’re back with the next two chapters of animal farm. I’m here with my copilot Imaginary Bob flying over the shadowy lands of Animaldom and we’ve got a great bird’s eye view. I’m sure you do to, so let’s get into this.

To start off, I thought I’d just mention the big thing that hit me in reading this. It’s the characters. They’re not very…[Read more]

What @hope said. 😀 Also, arcs of any kind. Scene arcs, character arcs, theme arcs, emotional arcs… if they ain’t smooth, I don’t like ’em.

Ha! Well, you must be on to something there @Daeus, because even though I’m not going very fast, I’m very happy with what I edited, and I managed to write a poem at the same time that didn’t need any editing and that I really love to pieces… so either it’s the running, or I’m so sleepy I don’t know what I’m doing and will wake up in the morning…[Read more]

@kate-flournoy Oh, I don’t know about that. This was an especially fast night. I’ll blame it on the running.

@Daeus wow, I think you’re faster at editing than I am! 😀

@kate-flournoy Edited 548.

I did get the problem fixed, thank you. I just got this kindle and it wasn’t connecting with our wifi router, but my dad figured out that some setting was blocking my device and so he changed the settings and it worked.

498 words edited, @Daeus. Did you figure out your problem?

@Daeus sounds great. See ya then.

@kate-flournoy Ok. I’m here now. How about till 9:15?

Okay @Daeus I’ll write with you. Notify me when you want to stop.

@kate-flournoy, @hannah-c, @bluejay I’m going to try to write tonight, but I’ve got this annoying problem I’m trying to fix, so I’m not sure when I’ll be done.

@overcomer it reads like a poem, but in theory it’s a prayer. I love it! Polish it up a bit, and I think it will be absolutely beautiful. 😀

@Hope Yeah, I see what you mean.
I just finished the Wingfeather Saga (@zoe-wingfeather). It. Was. Amazing. As for the ending, I thought it was really powerful and moving, even though…*sobs* And I agree with what you all have been saying about the ending. I wish Andrew Peterson had added a little more to the end so that the reader could find…[Read more]