@dancefree7
Active 8 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Bumbling Henchman
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus *stops*
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy um… yeah. Stop interrupting me. I’m editing your story.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus ah. I haven’t read that. I should though— I hear it’s really good. And I love lines of dialogue that are crammed with hidden meaning. They add so much thematically. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy Well, I don’t know. It’s from Crime and Punishment. There’s so much depth to that one line. It’s hard to pinpoint even. Very useful to quote though.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus well, I’m glad to hear it. That’s a lot of work, changing POV— especially changing from a single line of it to one for each one of the important characters. It would be pretty awful if it was all for nothing.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy Actually, that wasn’t sarcasm.
I am editing TATHOF. Just finished chapter six. Oh, I am so glad I changed POV. Thanks for backing me up on that one. Not that I don’t like omnipotent, it’s my favorite, but it wasn’t working with this book. Changing that is fixing pretty much all my major problems: Awkward phrasing, shallow…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus actually I do… was that sarcasm? 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy Oh, don’t you love those scenes. I wrote 1,115.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus 904 words edited, which is actually pretty good considering I was working on a very emotional scene and those are always slow going. What did you get?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus yes sir. See you at nine.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy You writing tonight?
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Ah, so close @warrioroftherealm. I just stopped actually. ): Will you be writing tomorrow?
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Hey, in case there’s any morning-ers out there, I’ll be writing for about an hour.
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Daeus replied to the topic Help please… *puppy eyes* in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
Huh, a kinda disillusionment. Maybe the prophecy about shield was cryptic and they thought it meant they would receive power from the shield, when really, it was all about the strengthening they would get through the journey.
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ClaireC replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@anna-brie, Not sure when I’ll be free tomorrow, but I’ll do my best! What’s a word war?
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ClaireC replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@anna-brie, I’m so sorry! I don’t have time today. Maybe tomorrow? Try me then. I can’t guarantee that I’ll be free but I’ll try! 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
*chokes* Nice.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Nice.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
I guess so. 😀
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