@dancefree7
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Dragon's Snapper in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper Oo I love medieval as a genre. My only problem is that my characters all speak modern day English.
Tell me, do you like flying???? -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@daeus Sorry, missed you again!!!!!!!!! So out of practise and really busy.
However, is there anyone who wants to write now? @overcomer; @jadamae; @daeus; @kate-flournoy; @clairec; @anna-brie; @anyone-else-who-I-haven’t-thought-of -
Daeus replied to the topic If there's one thing rewriting has taught me… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Ok people, this is like my topic, so I might just say a thing or two.
As I already mentioned, rewriting is, in my opinion, the most educational thing a writer can do. Forcing yourself to fix major problems teaches yourself so much about how you actually write and how it should look in contrast. Here are some of my biggest lessons.
POV matters.…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic If there's one thing rewriting has taught me… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Ok people, this is like my topic, so I might say a thing or two.
As I already mentioned, rewriting is, in my opinion, the most educational thing a writer can do. Forcing yourself to fix major problems teaches yourself so much about how you actually write and how it should look in contrast. Here are some of my biggest lessons.
POV matters.…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic If there's one thing rewriting has taught me… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@Daeus good idea. Okay people— so near the beginning of the book I had it so one character would be teaching another to sword-fight. I spent quite a bit of time developing their relationship prior to that— one character is so stubborn he wouldn’t have let the other character teach him if they hadn’t known each other for quite some time. So…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic If there's one thing rewriting has taught me… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy Actually, I would say there is no better way to learn writing, period.
Now I’ll have to be gone for just a moment because guess what I’m doing? Yep, rewriting.
By the way, you might want to give some more detailed examples of your lesson for people who aren’t familiar with your book.
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Daeus replied to the topic If there's one thing rewriting has taught me… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@kate-flournoy Actually, I would say there is not better way to learn writing, period.
Now I’ll have to be gone for just a moment because guess what I’m doing? Yep, rewriting.
By the way, you might want to give some more detailed examples of your lesson for people who aren’t familiar with your book.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic If there's one thing rewriting has taught me… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Ha. Anything, of course. 😉 No limit.
Yes. Besides reading, there’s almost nothing that can better prepare someone for writing than rewriting. Which may sound a bit counter-intuitive, but it’s true.
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Daeus replied to the topic If there's one thing rewriting has taught me… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Only one thing? Oh, dear. 😉
I’ve done a lot of rewriting and it’s a super enlightening process. I’ll have to think about this a bit and come back.
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Kate Flournoy started the topic If there's one thing rewriting has taught me… in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
This thread is for sharing tips about editing and rewriting or handy things we discovered in the process of doing that ourselves.
I shall kick it off because I recently discovered something crucial (with @Daeus‘s help 😉 ). I’m going through the first major edit/rewrite I’ve ever done, so perhaps this is old news to some of you more experienced…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic A Dragon's Snapper in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper Yeah, well, one can only handle so many dragons and then it all breaks down into chaos.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Dragon's Snapper in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
@Dragon-Snapper awesome handle. Is there a story behind that?
Oh yeah— welcome to the Realm of the KeePers of the Kingdom. There are *ahem* a few dragons on this forum, myself included… it would be greatly appreciated if you refrained from doing any… erm… snapping? 😉
Where do you hail from?
Glad to have you here. *salutes* Captain. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Hullo @bluejay. Are you writing tonight?
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ClaireC replied to the topic A Dragon's Snapper in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper, Welcome!! I applaud you with great gusto! 🙂
The Kingdom Pen really is the bestistest place on earth!! (yes I know, @bluejay, you already said it!)
Where are you from? I’d like to ask other things but @bluejay got there first, so I guess I’ll just see the answers to her questions.
Welcome! Glad to have you. 😉 -
ClaireC replied to the topic A Dragon's Snapper in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper, Welcome!! I applaud you with great gusto! 🙂
The Kingdom Pen really is the bestistest place on earth!! (yes I know, @blue-jay, you already said it!)
Where are you from? I’d like to ask other things but @blue-jay got there first, so I guess I’ll just see the answers to her questions.
Welcome! Glad to have you. 😉 -
ClaireC replied to the topic A Dragon's Snapper in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper, Welcome!! I applaud you with great gusto! 🙂
The Kingdom Pen really is the bestistest place on earth!! (yes I know, @blue-jay, you already said it!)
Where are you from? I’d like to ask other things but @blue-jay got there first, so I guess I’ll just see the answers to her questions.
Welcome! Glad to have you. ;P -
Daeus replied to the topic A Dragon's Snapper in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
Howdy Dragon Snapper. Nice way to cruise on in. Looks like there’s a good forecast on the forum. Should be nice travel.
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Dragon's Snapper in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
@dragon-snapper *stares at post with open mouth. Reads command at the end and obeys* **Applauds**
Welcome to Kingdom Pen the bestistest place on earth.
*Gasps* *I’ve always wanted to fly* Dreams do come true.
So…tell us about you. How long have you been writing? Favourite authors? Genre?
And I’ll say it again………..welcome. 🙂 -
Daeus replied to the topic Prophecy Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@hope Not sure if this will work for your prophecy, but this is what sounded good to me.
Ancient sign, bitter fate
Scar and oath and quest
Name revealed by righteous power
Shall poison’s power wrestAncient weapon, bitter foe
Shield and spear and doom
Legend shattered, triumph claimed
A sign will show the tombAncient battle, bitter bane,
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Daeus replied to the topic Prophecy Critique in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@hope Not sure if this will work for your prophecy, but this is what sounded good to me.
Ancient sign, bitter fate
Scar and oath and quest
Name revealed by righteous power
Shall poison’s power wrestAncient weapon, bitter foe
Shield and spear and doom
Legend shattered, triumph claimed
A sign will show the tombAncient battle, bitter bane,
Night…[Read more] - Load More
