Hannah Whatley

@Daeus here I am! Returned from the dead!

*dives into critic-mode* Okay, I like it? First problem is it doesn’t fit the genre. Not sure it quite looks like a romance, but it doesn’t really fit the story. Some of that may be because of the boring brick wall but you said that’s going, so… yeah. For an action/adventure though it’s too calm and…[Read more]

Ah, yes, I was thinking a redish-gold actually.

Also @daeus, a deep red might look cool in your name and title.

@daeus I like it, I don’t have much to add outside of everyone else’s comments, I’d say just experiment with what they pointed out then bring it back for us to look at. 😉

@hope Let’s hope the mice don’t eat her. Mice do that, you know.

You’re probably right about just having the hand. I’m thinking I’ll try for just a locket, thought perhaps the girl and/or just hand could be edited to work.

Here. Let me see if it will appear bigger if I turn it sideways.

@i-j-anderson Thanks! Regardless of the girl’s age, do you think she fits well aesthetically? Does she look a bit too ghostly or not match the coloring? Do you think maybe she could fit perfect, but there needs to be certain edits first?

There’s no actual problem with her age, I just wanted her to be more like six, but I’ll compromise on that for…[Read more]

Ahh! Hold on, Kate. Don’t die.

Sorry, folks. Kate’s dead. Who’s gonna write her eulogy?

vwat? vwat is dis?

Oh, I think I know what it is.

No… maybe I should just wait until the internet connection isn’t so spotty. That shouldn’t affect it, but maybe it does. And I’m about to lose signal anyway…

@kate-flournoy This work?

Huh… that is weird. I’m having internet troubles, maybe that’s it?

@kate-flournoy Really? I can see it. This is a bit weird… Let me see if I can do it another way here.

Thanks everybody! Great comments.

@winter-rose @emma-flournoy I think the main problem with the font is definitely the color, though I think you might be right in saying the font could be better too.

So if you were to choose a different font, what would it look like?

@Daeus it’s not showing up…

@Daeus oohhh, I really like it. I would say yes, probably better to get your name matching the title. Also, a bit more technical piece of criticism here… my inner graphic designer is screaming at me that there should be more motion in the picture. It’s a lovely dramatic picture (love the shadows of the houses and such) but a lot more could be…[Read more]

@Ethryndal Certainly!

@jess Yes! I’ll be in prayer for his upcoming procedure.

Aha! It worked.

Ah, I didn’t think it would do that. Let me try this.