Hannah Whatley

@Dragon-Snapper what they all said.

I will just add that it’s definitely not an uncommon problem to have. There were times in the past two years as I waded through two drafts of my WIP that I just felt like going and drowning any capability of conscious thought in a deluge of mindless articles— anything to save myself from having to open my…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Hey, good! That’s about as much as I would normally get written in a full day.

I edited around 1,400 words.

@dragon-snapper Oh! I just stopped recently. You haven’t been alone for too long. *grimace*

@aratrea Oh, just an outline.

@dragon-snapper Back I am now.

@Aratrea It looks good. My one thought is that the home page is a little crowded. It’s hard to know what to focus on. If the text below “the chronicles of morshan” were smaller and preferable clumped together in a decorative box thingy, I think it would look cleaner.

@dragon-snapper Got half a chapter edited and I’m signing off for now, but I’ll be back sooner or later to finish the other half.

@Aratrea I really like it!

First thing I noticed— in your bio you said, when you were describing KP, ‘through proficiency and purpose.’ I thought it was ‘with proficiency and purpose.’

If it’s possible, it might also be better to have your page options in a little bit bigger font. It took me a second and a few confused glances to find them.…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Just saw this. If you’re still deciding, go write in your novel.

@That_Writer_Girl_99 sounds like a plan.

Ahhh… you can do it. 😉

@dragon-snapper Stop procrastinating! I’m back!

For an hour.

@dragon-snapper Ah! I just left. I aim to be back in about fifteen to twenty minutes though.

@winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 Adios.

@winter-rose Yahoo!

@jess @dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @winter-rose @graciegirl

For those of you hearing this, I plan to edit for an hour here. To victory!

@jess @dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 @ethryndal @winter-rose @gracie-girl

For those of you hearing this, I plan to edit for an hour here. To victory!

@Cloudy just want to let you know I haven’t abandoned you; I’m going through the story bit by bit and formulating thoughts and such. 😉

@That_Writer_Girl_99 meh. Logic. Who cares about logic? 😛

Forget the logic for a sec. What is the most natural emotional course for the characters? Go wild. Not even kidding.
And one question that might give you some answers— what is the Warden going to do with Blake? What are they saying/doing, locked up in that office together?

*pulls out sword pen and sticks it behind her ear* How can I help?

@That_Writer_Girl_99

Oooooh, I like it!

There is one thing that could use tweaking though. Both Kara and Matthias seem a little scattered and unfocused as to their emotional state. Now they’re supposed to be; I know. They’re both confused. But the reader shouldn’t be. It’s not that both of them shouldn’t be struggling with several different emotions at once, but that…[Read more]