@daeus
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic I need a character name! Help! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Wait, wait, wait. @daeus. It took you a month to read LotR? I read it in two days?! I am faster than I thought….
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NC Stokes replied to the topic The Books of Leifer! (My trilogy needs help) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@aislinn-mollisong Wow. Can I read your story when it’s finished?? Please??? It sounds awesome. I also have a tendency to get an idea, but then have a fuzzy area in the middle. I… would like to be very wise and give advice, but I need help, too. I shall call in -erm, tag- the cavalry. @daeus @aratrea @kate-flournoy @hope @dragon-snapper @that_wri…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy posted an update 8 years, 7 months ago
@daeus looks like we have a rogue topic over in novel ideas. It had some weird formatting so it probably got spammed.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
I live in Florida too, in Tampa. If y’all could pray for the safety of my family and those who will be and have been impacted by this hurricane, I’d be grateful. @shannon @daeus @emma-flournoy @graciegirl
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@daeus @epicaddie2 @jane-maree @catwing @shannon @emily @bethanysinkyroses @daughteroftheking
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EpicAddie2 replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@daeus I wish I could join you, but sadly, I have lots and lots of school work.
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Snapper replied to the topic Master and Apprentice–Don't Turn to the Dark Side in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@daeus Sometimes, I’m really not sure what to do with you…
@kate-flournoy If I try to imagine myself as an introvert, I don’t like it either. XD
@graciegirl Ooh, that’s a good idea. I might use that along with @seekjustice ‘s idea of another language.
Notes to self: *do not steal the use of the word Kreylar, even purposefully…[Read more] -
Snapper started the topic Master and Apprentice–Don't Turn to the Dark Side in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
Hello Kapeefers! (do I get a ringtone for that @aratrea ?)
So quick question…
Hypothetically, if I wanted to have a ‘master and apprentice’ idea thing in a book, and hypothetically the apprentice would be called the apprentice because hypothetically those actually existed then hypothetically, what would I call the master so that hypothetically I…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@daeus @emily @shannon @catwing @epicaddie2 @bethanysinkyroses I’m on, either writing or editing or…noting…? Not sure what yet…
Anyway, here’s me, writing.
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PrincessFoo replied to the topic Plot Help? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
@ryanna As @daeus said, you described a setting, not a plot. That said, that doesn’t seem to be a particularly cliche setting to me. Sure, you aren’t the first person to strand people on an island, or have intelligent animals, but adding unique details (like the fact that they live in groups of two or three,) can easily set the story apart.
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Snapper replied to the topic Does the Bible forbid using an alias? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Plot Help? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
Hello Ryanna!
It’s great that you’ve planned out quite a bit of your story! Just a thought I have that I’ve seen mentioned on here, is to flip the cliche. Figure out what is expected to happen (in a certain situation, or in the plot in general) and then do the opposite.
Here is an article that Kingdom’s Pen wrote about ways to bend cliches…[Read more]
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DelightInLife replied to the topic Plot Help? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 8 months ago
Hello Ryanna!
It’s great that you’ve planned out quite a bit of your story! Just a thought I have that I’ve seen mentioned on here, is to flip the cliche. Figure out what is expected to happen (in a certain situation, or in the plot in general) and then do the opposite.
Here is an article that Kingdom’s Pen wrote about ways to bend cliches…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #8 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@catwing @daeus @shannon @epicaddie2 @jessi-rae I’m either writing, editing or evilly plotting. One of those three. Join me, and we can rule the…ah…solar system.
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Hannah R. replied to the topic Does the Bible forbid using an alias? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@kate-flournoy @daeus
Thank you so much for your excellent thoughts! I agree that God is definitely powerful enough to save lives even when we think our honesty might ruin everything.
The only thing that’s still tripping me up is the difference between lying and deception. Even outside the context of my own story, this question perplexes me. I…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Does the Bible forbid using an alias? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@his-instrument *blink* Wow, excellent question… I had to think about this one…
However, my answer is not going to be as theological or philosophical as @daeus and @kate-flournoy 😛
So, it wasn’t your post that made me think about this, but rather, the title. Your word alias, made me think about all the alias’ in the world right now. Pen…[Read more]
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Hannah R. started the topic Does the Bible forbid using an alias? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
Hello, KeePers. I’m back–in another theological quandary.
So here’s the backstory. I have a finished manuscript called Prince of the Barbarians. (If you’ve read this, you’ll be especially helpful to this discussion, so let me tag y’all… @catwing @jadamae @dragon-snapper @daeus @jess.)
The novel centers around a young prince named Cerdic, whose…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Theme in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@Allison-Grace *sniffs* They already said it all.
I’ll just second what @Daeus said; you can have as many themes as you think will work, so long as they’re all related and complement each other. For instance, if your primary theme is honesty, your supporting themes could be telling the truth in love and/or telling the truth even when it’s ugly.…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Finished! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
@mariposa Aha….I think that I’ll give it to him when it’s done being edited then. *glances over work*
Oh dear. Dinosaur will not read this thing. XD
@kate-flournoy *goes forth and conquers*
@daughteroftheking *hopes desperately that the world doesn’t explode for the surge of confetti*
@emma-flournoy Tis ye olde science fiction. 😀 I think I’m…[Read more] -
Ethryndal replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 8 months ago
Hey guys, let’s remember to keep Texas and the victims and refugees of Harvey in our prayers. They need it more than ever.
@Dragon-Snapper @Emma-Flournoy @Kate-flournoy @That_writer_girl_99 @Graciegirl @Winter-rose @Daeus @Anne-of-lothlorien @Daughteroftheking @All-the-people-I-suddenly-can’t-think-of @Oh-well-you-know-who-you-are
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