@daeus
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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EpicAddie2 replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Oooooh lots of cool articles! Thank you!
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EpicAddie2 replied to the topic World building advice? in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Thank you! I’m gonna tag my friend (who’s on here but hardly ever) so she can read all this.
@aysia-serene Here’s lots of world building advice!
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NC Stokes replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus I. Want. To. Do. This. So badly!!! But, I’m afraid I just don’t have the time. *is sad*
Oh, by the way, I started reading Fools in the Darkness, and I’m enjoying it muchly! -
EpicAddie2 started the topic World building advice? in the forum 8 years, 6 months ago
So, my friend and I are working together to build a whole fantasy world. The only problem is that neither of us have ever created a fantasy world like we are attempting to do. Do you guys have any tips? Any advice is welcome!
@emily @shannon @catwing @daeus @dragon-snapper @salome01w4g @daughteroftheking
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Hannah replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus I finished commenting on part one. I’d finish it all right now but I have some other stuff I need to get done. The story is very interesting, and I really like the way you used Aztec culture to tell the story, it added a lot of mystery and intrigue to it.
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Hannah replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus okay! Get ready, 😉 lol
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Hannah replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@perfectfifths Perelandra was really creepy but tbh it had a good ending.
@daeus I read it last night , should I leave comments on the GG Doc or how do you want feed back? -
Gracie replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus Ergh! I JUST remembered that I leave Friday for a camping trip. 😕 (Man, how in the world did I forget that?!) I’ll be gone for a couple days so I wouldn’t be able to make the deadline.
I’m afraid I must withdraw my offer. 😔
But best of luck to you with the story! -
Louise Fowler replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus All right. Keep in mind I recently had to stop reading Perelandra from Lewis’ space trilogy because it got too creepy, but that doesn’t usually happen for me. But I’m learning to stop reading if I can’t handle it, so just fair warning. 😛
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J.A. Penrose replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Yup, one week should do it! I’m looking forward to reading this! Do you want me to do what I did last time or something totally different? And I shall click the ‘here’ thing.
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Hannah replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus okay perfect!
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Hannah replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus two things:
1) Idk if you meant to share in edit mode, crazy things can happen with brothers who like to mess up my computer tabs,
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2) Would you be okay if I downloaded it as a EPUB or PDF to put on my kindle?
I have a really hard time reading stuff on a 19″ screen. 😀 (Unless I’m writing, or not required to concentrate for long time periods.) -
Hannah replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus okie-doke I sent you a message.
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Joy replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Could have been melded with a fox! *shrug*
Well, it’s not a fang, it’s a… I dunno, I guess it’s just called a monster 🙂 -
Ethryndal replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus Well this is cool.
I have one thought to add to the whole diary debate thing… If the character only lives when he’s being written, how can he keep a diary? When does he have the time for that?
And I’ll have you know that this story has ruined my life. I’ve spent the last day or so pondering the fact that the ‘Hero’ isn’t actually the…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus, my photo is a drawing I did of one of the characters in my novella. I’m not sure what Redwall is, but have you read the Wingfeather Saga? I looks kinda like a fang to me 😀
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Hannah replied to the topic Greetings in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus that’s what that reminds me of…. *shudders* redwall the worst part of my child hood
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Gracie replied to the topic The Golden Ziggurat in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus depends on what kinda critique you’re looking for. Would it be basically the same stuff as we did with Fools in the Darkness?
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Snapper replied to the topic Kapeefer Poem in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Lovely! XD
@daeus Nice one. You got a line of respect. 😛
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Jess started the topic How does one write an unhappy ending? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
*sneaks into forum. realizes that I’ve disappeared for a while.*
Hello! I’m back!!!I’m in the middle of plotting a novel, and I realized that I’m going to have to write an unhappy ending.
It’s going to be unhappy in the fact that my protagonist doesn’t get what she’s worked for during the entire book. I think she’s going to realize that…[Read more] - Load More
