@daeus
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Leumeister replied to the topic Do Screen/Teleplay Ideas Count? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@dekreel Blender!!! 😀 Oh, I love Blender! XD I love animating, too. 😀 It’s so satisfying, and even though it’s tedious, it can even be fun! Like you may have to do a bit of problem-solving to get things looking right.
@dragon-snapper Yeah, I suppose it is, isn’t it? XD
@daeus Thanks! 😀 🙂
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Aislinn Mollisong replied to the topic The Books of Leifer! (My trilogy needs help) in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
I’m just going to tag people because I forgot to earlier. @catwing @jess-penrose @dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @aratrea @daeus @lady-iliara @xonos-darkgrate @silverclaw-bonnetfolly
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@emily-d @allison-grace @aislinn-mollisong @emily @catwing @salome01w4g @daeus @kate-flournoy @ingridrd @sarah-anson @alltheotherpeopleonthistopic
I made another one.

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Snapper replied to the topic Do Screen/Teleplay Ideas Count? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@leumeister Well, it is a ‘story’ idea isn’t it? *shrugs* I think you could probably post it here. @daeus or @aratrea would probably know more about that, but I don’t think they’ll be mean about where a certain topic is placed.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Cover Feedback in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus What everyone else said. 😀 Maybe just a sliiigghtly textured or darker background, but it already looks good.
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Gracie replied to the topic Cover Feedback in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus *echoes what everyone else has said* 😛 If you want ominous, some darker or even red-tinted shadows, but I honestly think it looks great as is.
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Lady Iliara replied to the topic Lady Iliara greets thee! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus @kate-flournoy @catwing @daughteroftheking @aislinn-mollisong @xonos-darkgrate @silverclaw-bonnetfolly @salome01w4g @anyone who wants to
Would you mind critiquing a chapter of my “Alex and Ian” story for me? I generally feel like my stories are missing something—sometimes I call it emotion, or description, or maybe not enough chara…[Read more] -
Lady Iliara started the topic Poem Snippets by Iliara in the forum Poetry 8 years, 5 months ago
Warning: I don’t know what may come up here. It may be serious, or it may be funny. Knowing me, probably mostly funny. Tell me what you think!
This is the first poem I’ll post.For You
Once I dreamed a dream, and once I found a light.
Once I fought the darkness, and once my hopes came right.
Once I fell for you, and ever I’ll be true.
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Joy replied to the topic Haikus in the forum Poetry 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Hehe! Oh man, that just might be the best haiku I’ve ever seen!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic 2nd person mystery? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus You’re probably crazy, but knowing your capabilities, I’ve got full confidence that you can do it.
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katie replied to the topic 2nd person mystery? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus it definitely sounds like an intriguing plot to accomplish!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Lady Iliara greets thee! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@Lady-iliara WELCOME! I’m an ENFJ too, dominantly at least. With some strong ISFJ tendencies. Have fun reading through all the old topics. I’m sure you won’t get bored. 😀
@Shannon @daeus @kate-flournoy I know we have at least one more ENTP, @bethanysinkyroses. 😉
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Hannah replied to the topic Haikus in the forum Poetry 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus nice, you forgot to add chocolate or raspberries to it 😉 does everyone round here really like raspberries or is it an inside joke I’ve yet to catch on to?
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Joy started the topic Haikus in the forum Poetry 8 years, 5 months ago
Has anybody ever written a haiku?? I’ve written a few…
Stars dotting the sky
Moonlight shining down at me
Shooting stars fly by (My very first haiku 🙂 )Mom bought me white shoes
I wore them to summer camp
They ain’t white no moreDreary, long-drawn rain
Whispering its secrets to
The listening earthHere is my Haiku
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Joy started the topic Thirteen Plus Five in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 5 months ago
My Doctor Who novella sample. What do you think?
@daeus, @graciegirl, @that_writer_girl_99, @lady-iliara, @dragon-snapper, @catwing, @jane-maree, @kate-flournoy, @salome01w4g, @Any more Whovians out there?
“We’ve changed course.”
“What do you mean we’ve changed course?”
“I mean we’ve changed course, Alfred.”
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Lady Iliara replied to the topic The Red Dragon in the forum Poetry 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus @catwing @perfectfifths @emily
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Joy replied to the topic Cover Feedback in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus That’s pretty cool! I would add more shadow to the ziggurat and then lightly sketch in a bit of mountains or buildings or desert (or wherever you ziggurat is) in the background so it doesn’t look like it’s just floating in the middle of nowhere. It would look more like it was actually a place, instead of like a mystical thing. 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic 2nd person mystery? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus :-O :-O That sounds like the coolest thing ever! I wonder if it’s possible to make it one of those choose-your-own-adventure stories. That would be pretty cool.
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Sink replied to the topic Lady Iliara greets thee! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
Hey everyone! I’m still trying to figure out this forum thingy, so be patient. Anyways, @daeus, thanks for the welcome! Yes, KP is a great place.
@kate-flourney, I write mostly fantasy, with some sci-fi, dystopian, fairy-tale re-tellings…basically anything that sparks my interest. I think I have around twenty(something?) WIPs right now…
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