@daeus
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Fair enough.
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katie replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus – so I definitely like the color better! 😀😀 the only thing is, Is there a way to make the text a little bigger, so it’s more readable and “eye-catching”?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of your characters react at that point or the reader will not react. For instance, if you think you can get your rea…
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Louise Fowler replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus That is a really interesting principle. How did you come about thinking of that?
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus personally the site strikes me as good but not eye-catching, this could be because I’m a little of a website snob, with having a web design and developer as a sister. 😛 My thoughts are:
– seconding what everyone’s said about the ‘get your free training now’ button being jarring and not professional or fitting with the rest of the…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus Oooooh, me likey! Though I would consider what @lifeofkatie said about the “Geat Your Free Training Now” button. It’s kinda…ugly. 😜 Other than that though, brilliant job! 🙂
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katie replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus – I like it a lot…my only suggestion is the color of the “Get Your Free Training Now” button. To me, it really contrasts and doesn’t really flow with the rest of the colors. In my personal opinion, it doesn’t look as professional as everything else. But, that’s just me. I’m not sure if it’s something you can change or not. Besides that, I…[Read more]
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PrincessFoo replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus I got that the page couldn’t be found either.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus I’m having the same problem as @winter-rose…😕
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DragonGeek replied to the topic *bursts in in an explosion of confetti* in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus INTP… I think. INFP is also a strong possibility.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus Oh, I forgot to mention that. Yes, it is with deep sadness and terrible, aching regret that I must inform you…
I’m not leaving. Don’t worry. 😉
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Ethryndal started the topic Can it Possibly have been a Year? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
My dear KaPeefer friends…
This is it. One year ago today, my shaking fingers typed out a vague and slightly snarky introduction letter. I didn’t say much, but what I did say, I endeavored to make it sound smart. (I failed.) I signed it “Ethryndal”. I didn’t half know who she was, but she sounded nice, and she sounded like me.
My finger hovered…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy started the topic Because I promised I would… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
*crawls out of a hidden drain, dripping wet and covered in seaweed* SO… hey. It’s me. I actually don’t have a revolutionary writing concept to share today. Or advice to ask for. I’m starting this topic for a much more mundane reason.
I promised several of you (and I’ve forgotten exactly who *cringes*) to let you know when I had my blog up and…[Read more]
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Silverclaw Bonnetfolly replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
I love how just randomly, pages later the topic of Doctor Who will pop up again.
@daeus I know right!
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Snapper started the topic War-Torn City in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 5 months ago
So, I have an idea for a story, but I need a reason for this one aspect.
Why would a city be abandoned after a war. Like a huge city, with a population of a couple million. Why would it be abandoned, and why would it stay abandoned for 15+ years. Ideas? Brainstorm? Throw it at me.
@daeus @mark-kamibaya @kate-flournoy @catwing @aratrea @emily @la…[Read more]
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Sink started the topic I need help–#book issues in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
Hello there, everyone! I have an issue….and it’s kind of a big one. So, @daeus, @hope, @catwing, @allison-grace, @daughteroftheking, @ingrid, @emily, @dragon-snapper, @aislinn-mollisong, @anyone, help me out.
So, my story has a sort of “quest” in it. The problem is….I can’t get my guys to leave the safety of the castle. But they have to. And…[Read more]
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Silverclaw Bonnetfolly replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus good luck, he lives in New Zealand.
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Silverclaw Bonnetfolly replied to the topic Just Chatter #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
@emily-d No I love Chuck Black!!!
@daeus Goku is one of the moderators for the Aetherlight forums, it’s really a compliment that some of us think you are like him.
@that_writer_girl_99 My older sister would agree with you but NO Nine is totally the best, he is the first doctor for me, me sisters made me start with the new series before I went…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Great Battle of NaNoWriMo 2017 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 5 months ago
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katie replied to the topic Graphic design advice? in the forum Art 8 years, 5 months ago
@daeus – love the last design for the title section and I like the first option for the slides 😀 but that’s just my two cents.
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