@daeus
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@daeus Good afternoon, your Majesty! *unfortunately I don’t have any ice cream of offer, please pardon me* What are you working on?
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Snapper replied to the topic Lack of Plot in the forum Plotting 8 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy @daeus @sam-kowal @perfectfifths @shannon
Thanks guys! All ya’ll advice worked! I now have a story on my hands. 😀
It’s going to be fantasy, and the theme will be perseverance. Thanks all!!! *flies off, barely able to fly cause she’s so excited*
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Joy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper @daeus I’m back!! Either of you still here?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #11 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@daeus *hands you ice cream* Hey! Good to see you!
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Snapper replied to the topic Discussion for Video Two: The Importance of Theme in the forum Discussion Questions 8 years, 4 months ago
Ah, thank you!
This should help a lot.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
(On a more serious note) Those are good points, @daeus , thanks! 🙂
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Snapper started the topic Lack of Plot in the forum Plotting 8 years, 4 months ago
Hey Kapeefers!
I’m stuck.
Not that Chosen One’s get stuck or anything… 😉
Anyway, recently I’ve decided to major things. One is that I’m taking a break from one story until I’m way older cause then it will be way better than it would be if I wrote it now (there are more reason for that, but it is what it is.) Two, is that I’m annoyed with…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@daeus Thought you might like that 😉
@princessfoo That’s perfect! Thanks!!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@Dekreel @That_Writer_Girl_99 @Dragon-snapper @Ethryndal @Daeus @Audrey-caylin @Jane-maree @Shannon @Sam-Kowal wow, thanks so much guys, all of you. Just getting the general feedback and feeling out opinion about the existing title helped me get so much more perspective.
@Jane-Maree, believe it or not, I had actually already considered Destroyer,…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Help! I don't understand my characters! in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago
@shannon I don’t have time to answer this properly right now, as I’m on my way out the door, but I would suggest to you finding an online character chart to fill out ( @daeus @aratrea does KP have any character charts or things that might help Shannon?) Start there and I’ll try to give you more indepth advice when I get back. 😊
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Joy replied to the topic A Keeper Adventure in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper Ahh! Awesome! Isn’t is funny how we can get inspiration from the smallest things, like sewing machines? 😀
@daeus @kate-flournoy @ingridrd @sam-kowal @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @lady-iliara @0-0enyali0-0 @princessfoo Just to tease you guys a little bit, I’m going to give you the first few lines of the prologu…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy started the topic Title opinions? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Hey, KeePers. I know I keep popping on and off very randomly, and I do hope sometime to be able to get back to a more regular presence, but for now this’ll have to do. 😛
I have a question for you guys. See, I have this book. I wrote it when I was fourteen and it’s due for a serious rewrite. That part is all under control.
But I’m having a bit…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@daeus Thank you, thank you, thank you. Wow, that flows so much better…I’m gonna rewrite it, using your tips. 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic I'm rubbish at this… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
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Lady Iliara replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@daeus Wow. That was great! I loved your symbolism. And I have yet to reach that level of depth with my character portrayals. 😁 Fantastic job! 😃😃
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Ben Powell replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@daeus Okay, I just sat down to read this, and I didn’t get back up until I had finished it. Wonderful! You developed amazing character depth in a short amount of time. I hope you don’t mind free publicity, because I will be recommending this to people. Seriously, great story! 😀
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Ben Powell replied to the topic Switching Between POVs in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago
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Ben Powell started the topic Switching Between POVs in the forum Characters 8 years, 4 months ago
Hey, people. So… In my current WIP I have one main character who is supposed to be “telling the story” (it starts out with an introduction of him talking about his and his father’s lives, and the rest of the book is him telling that story), so the parts that the MC is in are written in 1st person, while the parts of the story without him are…[Read more]
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EpicAddie2 replied to the topic It's out! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@daeus Congrats!!! *hands you a few gallons of ice cream* I got the email for it a couple days ago. I haven’t had time to read it yet but I intend to start it today 😉
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