@daeus
Active 6 years, 1 month ago- Rank: Chosen One
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MoriahS replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus Yes, the research isn’t as much fun. I agree with you there. 🙂
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus yessir. I stopped doing this wonderful thing once I approached (aka got within ten chapters of :’D) the climax and started really having to rethink you-know-who. My typical writing night was too messy to have too much competition or I would have imploded from the double pressure. 😛 Once I get past the chapter I’m on (wherein about eight…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Ah, yes, the shows that were around when I was little were the good ones. 😛
@daeus I’m signing out now. I wrote about 850 words, not much of it being dialogue, but I think it’s good action, so I’m happy with it. -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
Pizzazz. For some reason, I think of an explosion of glitter when I hear that word… @daeus @dragon-snapper
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus Well, that’s always important. Pizzazz. I’ll have to use that word.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus Well, that’s always important. Pizzazz.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
Yeah, I thought you’d already planned that out… @daeus
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy @daeus @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @jane-maree Here is the FULL Prologue and Chapter 1. I didn’t actually provide the entire of Chapter 1 before. Tell me what you think.
Prologue
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blending with the browns and greens of the a…[Read more] -
The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @jane-maree The entirety of the Prologue and Chapter 1 (I didn’t actually give you guys the whole of Chapter 1 to begin with):
Prologue
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blending with the browns and greens of the autumn forest. She leapt over…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus I thought you already had that covered. You know, campaigning?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
Finally working on my WIP, guys! @winter-rose @dragon-snapper @graciegirl @daeus
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The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @jane-maree Could you guys tell me if you think it’s a good idea to make Halle part of Maya’s daydream? Please note that they will meet in person at the Academy in a few chapters. Here’s an update on the Prologue:
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blend…[Read more] -
The Impossible Girl replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 2 months ago
@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy Tell me if you guys like the idea of Halle’s prologue being a dream-sequence of Maya’s. She’ll be meeting Maya herself at the Academy, so… I don’t know. Any other opinions are most welcome. Here is an updated version of the prologue:
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her ginger hair…[Read more] -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
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Northerner replied to the topic Writer's grief in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
@PrincessFoo, that was one of the first things I thought to check. . . no luck. It had everything up until the place I stopped at the night before, but nothing from that day. Which did mean I only lost 3,000 words instead of 15,000, but still.
@Emma-Flournoy, I have so far managed to evade the bear. He may be catching up, though, as I discovered I…[Read more] -
Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 2 months ago
I can’t do anything right now, but I’ll be on later to plan my WIP some more. @daeus
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 2 months ago
Never mind. I’ll reply to reviews. At least just a one-liner.
@christi-eaton So glad that somebody absolutely adores the best movie of 2016, La La Land!!!
@daeus Watched that when I was young, and I got bored. Maybe, now that I’m older, I’ll appreciate it.
@f5a8c3e92 Basically, Rogue One is a much watch, huh? -
Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 2 months ago
Never mind. I’ll reply to reviews. At least just a one-liner.
@christi-eaton So glad that somebody absolutely adores the best movie of 2016, La La Land!!!
@daeus Watched that when I was young, and I got bored. Maybe, now that I’m older, I’ll appreciate it.
@f5a8c3e92 Basically, it’s a much watch, huh? -
Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
Wow. @daeus
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 2 months ago
@Daeus *dreamily contemplates the infinite*
fyi… I really did write that down…
HA! *curtsies* Excepting the king himself, of course.
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