@daeus
Active 5 years, 11 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@graciegirl Yep.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@kate-flournoy Not to worry. 😛
That’s positively fascinating though. I wonder what type of backstory he must have had? He’s the most un-ENFJ ENFJ you could imagine, but…he’s…wow. I wish I could understand him. Or maybe not.
@graciegirl You gotta hear this.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@kate-flournoy Not to worry. 😛
That’s positively fascinating though. I wonder what type of backstory he must have had? He’s the most un-ENFJ ENFJ you could imagine, but…he’s…wow. I wish I could understand him. Or maybe not.
@graciegirl You gotta hear this.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@kate-flournoy Wait, do you think my apothecary was an ENFJ? Kind of a creepy idea, but I wonder if he might be…
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin nice
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@dragon-snapper *high five*
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Daeus replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
@audrey-caylin @winter-rose @graciegirl @jess @dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 I’ll be writing for an hour.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@kate-flournoy Maybe I will.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@graciegirl Hmm. Maybe I’ll actually watch Frozen now. *braces self for theme song*
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@graciegirl Hmm. Maybe I’ll actually watch Frozen now. *braces self for theme song*
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@ethryndal Mayhap. 😉 Btw, does anyone know of any really good ENFJ villains? I’ve been wanting to find a great ENFJ villain. (@kate-flournouy?)
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@kina-lamb Ha! I tricked you. I really do like to control people, I just don’t like them to feel like I’m controlling them and I don’t like to feel like I’m controlling them myself. Nasty feeling controlling people. You want to control them accidentally.
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Daeus replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years ago
@dragon-snapper It had gotten marked as spam. That’s the reason if a post doesn’t show up. I think it was the constant repetition of SACK and maybe some of the phraseology. It’s hard to know for sure.
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Daeus replied to the topic Favoritism in the forum Characters 9 years ago
@dragon-snapper Funny, I’m just facing this for the first time. I’ve got these two main characters, a brother and sister, and the brother (who is the protagonist) is of a moderate disposition whereas the sister is snarky, adventurous, and insanely awesome #ilovehertodeath.
I think one thing that’s helped me is separating them a lot. That way the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@dragon-snapper Oh, timesabers essentially make people cease to exist when they get hit by them.
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Daeus replied to the topic Phoenix Tears – Please Critique. in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years ago
@cloudy Well, I’m not very good with meter either and I hardly remember any of their names. I know iambic meter is the easiest though, so maybe go with that.
I find it hard to be real scientific about meter, so I basically just familiarize myself with examples, try to write rhythmically, and read my poetry to myself several times and tweak it…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Phoenix Tears – Please Critique. in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years ago
@cloudy The thing that stood out to me is that I think it would do a lot better with a meter.
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Daeus replied to the topic Beta Readers Wanted//Fantasy in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
Ack! Overcommitted. Sorry, I like beta reading.
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Daeus replied to the topic Finished! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
Wahoo! An outline’s not easy work. Congratulations on starting your first novel too.
1. Extended is a little relative. With my current WIP, I had all the plot points K.M.Weiland talks about outlined (minus one or two minor ones) before I started writing. Also, before every chapter, I spend at least an hour figuring out how the chapter is going to…[Read more]
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