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Daeus replied to the topic Hey, interesting internet strangers in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 9 months ago

@Devastate-Lasting Sweet, a philosopher!

I won’t stare at you for asking about true art. I might stare at you for trying to write a 35 volume series. 😉 Not because it’s crazy, but because it’s crazy. Yep. Haha. 😀

True art? I don’t know if I’ve ever heard that exact term before. I’ve come to the conclusion myself that art is not necessarily…[Read more]
Daeus replied to the topic Calling All Beta-Readers in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago

@dragon-snapper Okay, I’m on. Just give me a few days to cram in some of my own editing before I get started.
Daeus replied to the topic Songwriting Competition in the forum Music 8 years, 9 months ago

@dragon-snapper Really nice on both of them. The second one has a strong folky feel if that’s what you want, but I personally like the first one better.
Daeus replied to the topic Calling All Beta-Readers in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago

@dragon-snapper Maybe… How long is it?
Daeus posted a new activity comment 8 years, 9 months ago

Here’s the outline https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W87kcWtV1azNc5zA34D9jQ3yNl-wbnGDgYOnxAhrs5k/edit
In parentheses at the top it says (part 1 – emotion telling) The four lessons under that are the ones that have outlines.

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Daeus posted a new activity comment 8 years, 9 months ago

Part 1 – emotion telling. Right at the top of my outline. There are four lessons listed under it.

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- Kate Flournoy replied 8 years, 9 months ago
  
  Aha, thanks. Found it. 😉
Daeus posted a new activity comment 8 years, 9 months ago

@kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @aratrea Part 1 has outlines for all the lessons if you’d like to go check them out. 🙂 I’m hoping to write out lesson one today.

@sierra-r Have you seen this yet?

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- Elizabeth replied 8 years, 9 months ago
  
  Awesome! I’ll look them over today, probably later tonight. @daeus
- Kate Flournoy replied 8 years, 9 months ago
  
  @Daeus which one is part one…
  - Daeus replied 8 years, 9 months ago
    
    Part 1 – emotion telling. Right at the top of my outline. There are four lessons listed under it.
    - Kate Flournoy replied 8 years, 9 months ago
      
      Aha, thanks. Found it. 😉
- Josiah DeGraaf replied 8 years, 9 months ago
  
  Which lessons make up Part 1? Is there a doc somewhere that categorizes/lists all these lessons?
  - Daeus replied 8 years, 9 months ago
    
    Here’s the outline https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W87kcWtV1azNc5zA34D9jQ3yNl-wbnGDgYOnxAhrs5k/edit
    In parentheses at the top it says (part 1 – emotion telling) The four lessons under that are the ones that have outlines.
Daeus replied to the topic So I finally started a website. Feedback and suggestions welcome. in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago

@his-instrument I like it too. I would say the sidebar seems rather large though. Not sure if you can change that without changing the theme. One thought is that the text in the middle of the picture on the homepage is hard to see. Making it bigger would help.

Btw, wordpress.org has a forum you can go to for any WordPress issues you’re facing.…[Read more]
Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago

@ethryndal @dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @jess Signing out now. I did some editing on a really long chapter and now have to go back and do a lot more.

See you around later.
Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago

@dragon-snapper That. What did I spell it with Ks? I thought it looked weird, but it didn’t show a spelling mistake. *sigh*
Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 9 months ago

@ethryndal @dragon-snapper Oh, nice picknick going on here. I think I’ll join in. See you in an hour.
Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago

@dragon-snapper Very well. I edited about 1,100 words.
Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago

@dragon-snapper I’m back if you’re there. I think I’ll go for forty-five minutes to an hour.
Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago

@dragon-snapper Signing off. I edited 600 something words.
Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago

@dragon-snapper I’m back for another half an hour or so.
Daeus replied to the topic *raises hand shyly* Um, hello people. I've got a question! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago

@DaughteroftheKing My own personal way of wording this (which is infinitely better than Kate’s way, by the way) is that you want the villain to seem like an enemy of the villain. At least, that’s one good way to do it. There are probably others.

So, like Kate was saying, you want him to seem like he has secrets. People are naturally going to…[Read more]
Daeus posted a new activity comment 8 years, 10 months ago

*slaps hands to face* Horror of horrors!!! Agent Daeus is on it.

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- Kate Flournoy replied 8 years, 10 months ago
  
  Mission accomplished sir. You have my gratitude. *salutes*
Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago

@dragon-snapper Okay, signing off now. I got some editing done. Be back later.
Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago

@dragon-snapper Hey, I’ll join with you for 30 min. 🙂
Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #6 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago

@dragon-snapper I outlined a lesson for an e-course
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