@daeus
Active 4 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Daeus replied to the topic Hiya Everyone in the forum Start HERE 7 years ago
@waterlily Fangs are ugly!
Er, what I mean to say is welcome, welcome, welcome. 🙂
Say, you don’t happen to know what your MBTI type is, do you?
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Daeus replied to the topic New Form Topics in the forum Announcements 7 years ago
All credit goes to Josiah for putting this together!
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Daeus started the topic New Form Topics in the forum Announcements 7 years ago
Greetings KeePers,
I just wanted to inform you that our form topics have been reorganized into a more rational and spiffy system. Check it out!
@dragon-snapper @daughteroftheking @emily @shannon @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @jane-maree @sam-kowal @lady-iliara @hannah-c @aislinn-mollisong @that_writer_girl_99 @salome01w4g @photobloggergal @prince…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic An Interesting Concept I'm Working On in the forum Fantasy 7 years ago
@dragongeek Don’t worry. I still think it’s plenty original.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@salome01w4g So long! I only wrote 257, but, hey! It’s the evil first chapter and I’m a bit out of practice.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@salome01w4g I’m working on the first chapter of my fantasy trilogy. 🙂
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@salome01w4g Hey, I’ll join you for half an hour!
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@princessfoo Gotcha. 😉 I did think that sounded a little too isolated. 😛
The nice thing if you have access to your character’s head is that it will make it easier to write subtle stuff because you’ve got the character’s internal monologue to add to the equation.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@princessfoo Kapow! Wikipedia probably has a better answer than I do. At least I hope so. I didn’t actually read the article. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flirting
Btw, do you have The Emotion Thesaurus? If so, look up “love” in there.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@princessfoo You heard of the name before or you’ve heard of the principle?
Well, you the goal is to keep your characters from reacting with the same emotion your reader will react with. So if your reader is probably going to laugh at a joke, none of your characters should react to the joke in any hysterical way. If your reader is going to feel…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Start HERE 7 years ago
@sam-kowal Seriously? You’re an ENFJ? AWESOME! More ENFJs is always a good thing.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Start HERE 7 years ago
@sam-kowal Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
I like your dragon too. 🙂
And definitely Brandon Sanderson. I just finished his Mistborn trilogy recently. Really good.
Some of my favorite stories? (not necessarily in order) The Count Of Monte Cristo, Dreamlander, A tale of two cities, cry the beloved country, crime and…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@lifeofkatie I think I’ve got it fixed.
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@lifeofkatie On the button?
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@perfectfifths. Hmm. I just noticed one day that it was true because…I noticed it.
The thing I don’t like about romances is that they are fake. They make them too emotional. People aren’t like that.
They are so totally fake, but I don’t actually think people are any less emotional. They’re just less cheesy about it. ……[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
Yikes! These tags aren’t working. Let me try again. @shannon @emily @winter-rose.
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie
Okay! How about this?
http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-show-dont-tell-course/
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@jane-maree @shannon @emily @winter-rose @ingridrd @lifeofkatie Thanks. I’m working on a revision. I’ll get back to you sooner or later. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Writing Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@princessfoo Righty. Well, I don’t really read romance and I’m not an expert on it, but IÂ have written it just a bit.
My point is based on a principle I’m going to call Daeus’ principle just to stroke my vanity. This principle states that if you know at a certain point in your story you can get a reaction out of your reader, do not have any of…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Landing Page Critique? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years ago
@winter-rose @ingridrd @princessfoo Ah! My bad. Here, try again.
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