@daeus
Active 4 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Daeus replied to the topic Pinterest in the forum Publishing & Platform 6 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy Okay, here’s what that could look like with a border. The problem with borders is that I can’t find any that are adjustable, so I have to find one that’s just the right size and look. Looking at this, I think it would look better with a border that encompassed the whole lower half. I could get a different banner/plate for the top…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Pinterest in the forum Publishing & Platform 6 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy True. I was going to do something like that, but I couldn’t figure out how, so…I didn’t do anything like that. 😛
But I can do some sort of border. I’ll play with it.
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Daeus replied to the topic Pinterest in the forum Publishing & Platform 6 years, 11 months ago
@introvert_girl @lifeofkatie @seekjustice @kate-flournoy
Okay, unless anybody think’s it’s a terrible idea, I’m planning to use this for a writing school I’m launching this coming year.
My general impression of Pinterest leads me to think that quotes are good to post there, so I thought I’d do some short writing tip graphics. To make it easy on…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Would someone please tell me if these first chapters are too depressing? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument Another option is to add in an extra prologue or chapter in the beginning that has a very different tone just to give the reader something positive to latch onto.
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Daeus replied to the topic This Introduction Needs Refining in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 11 months ago
@dekreel One thing I noticed is that most of your sentences are very similar in length. It would help to vary that up a bit. Have some run-on sentences and some normal and some very short.
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Daeus replied to the topic Would someone please tell me if these first chapters are too depressing? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 years, 11 months ago
@his-instrument I love the plot line.
I don’t know if I’ll be able to read the first chapters, but just some thoughts. I think you can set a tone in these first chapters that lets your reader know you’re not out to scare them. If you don’t get too graphic with the murder and torture scene and you give the reader one or two, morally good, hopeful…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Pinterest in the forum Publishing & Platform 6 years, 11 months ago
@lifeofkatie Okay, thanks. That helps. I think I’m going to give it a try. 😀
@introvert_girl That makes sense, though I think I’ll create all my own pins.
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Daeus replied to the topic What IS a Character Arc?? in the forum Plotting 6 years, 11 months ago
@dekreel Btw, if you want to learn more about this, K.M.Wieland has a whole book on it. 😉
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Daeus replied to the topic Cover Feedback in the forum Publishing & Platform 6 years, 11 months ago
@jenwriter17 It’s actually done already. 🙂 http://www.thescratchingquill.com/the-golden-ziggurat/
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Daeus replied to the topic Pinterest in the forum Publishing & Platform 6 years, 11 months ago
@introvert_girl @kate-flournoy @seekjustice
Thanks for your replies!
So, I’ve read and listened to some stuff about Pinterest and I think if there is a social media site that would fit me, this would probably be it. I think I’ll probably give it a try, but before I commit to anything I like to have a strategy for how I’m going to use it.
I have…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Brainstorming help in the forum Plotting 6 years, 11 months ago
@introvert_girl Good question. I think in a short story, it isn’t necessary to fulfill your characters yearnings, though if you can, that would be great. I think you do need to show that the characters have made a significant step toward fulfilling their yearnings though.
Also, with villains and tragic characters, sometimes their yearnings should…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Resistance was futile… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
Okay, that without the exclamation point and dashes.
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Daeus replied to the topic Resistance was futile… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
*facepalm*
<!–a href=”https://kateeverythingwriting.wordpress.com/”>kateeverythingwriting.wordpress.com</a–>
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Daeus replied to the topic Resistance was futile… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
Ugh. Stop converting the html!
Like this only without the forward slashes.
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Daeus replied to the topic Resistance was futile… in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy I have no idea what could be causing the weirdness in your link. My two thoughts are make sure your html looks like this:
kateeverythingwriting.wordpress.com
And if it already does, try using a bitly link and seeing if that changes anything.
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Daeus replied to the topic Brainstorming help in the forum Plotting 6 years, 11 months ago
@introvert_girl Oh, I totally misread you. 😛
Okay, great. Glad it helps. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Brainstorming help in the forum Plotting 6 years, 11 months ago
@introvert_girl Well, I would argue that it actually does pertain to plot. If you’re looking to develop the plot in your story, I would ask, “What needs to happen to fulfill these characters’ yearnings and what obstacles are going to stand in their way?”
As for need vs. want, it depends on how you look at it. 😉  Man does not live on bread…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Brainstorming help in the forum Plotting 6 years, 11 months ago
@introvert_girl Oh, yes. You know what, I’m just going to dump you with an article. This will help you figure out your plot I believe. If it doesn’t, I can clarify how to do it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kpZLtQ2gtGJEbvSGRvD6I5pdSRca9IfkHDGh4TAYJwU/edit?usp=sharing
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Daeus replied to the topic Succession House Question in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 11 months ago
@aratrea ought to be able to answer this.
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Daeus replied to the topic Hi, I'm GabbyJ! in the forum Start HERE 6 years, 11 months ago
@gabbyj Oh, hi! I was wondering when you would show up.
Well, here you are. Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
What filmmaking do you dabble in (if you don’t mind me asking)? 😉
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