@daeus
Active 6 years ago- Rank: Chosen One
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@dragon-snapper Yeah, I’d say that was great for sure. I only managed to eek out 508 words, but that’s better than I was doing before. Thanks lady dragon and @kate-flournoy
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper Ok, here I am now. See you at 2.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy @draggon-snapper Ok, here I am now. See you at 2.
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Daeus replied to the topic May I ask for some help? -World Naming- in the forum Fantasy 9 years, 9 months ago
Ganadir sounds cool. Really though, you know your own world the best, so if anything really jumps out at you, that’s probably the right name.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper Just realized I have to sort laundry. Be with you as soon as I can.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy Ok, good. I’ll try to meet you at 12:30
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@kate-flournoy Somehow I’ve managed to evade seeing if you’re writing today, but if so I really need to join you. I’m having commitment block and need accountability. I’ll probably take a break here, but I can write pretty much any time of the day.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
*Rushes in* @kate-flournoy @bluejay @draggon-snapper I’m ready to write now. *disappears in a cloud of smoke*
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Daeus replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 9 months ago
@bluejay Sure. That’s fine. I doubt it will still look like a body though 🙁
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Daeus posted a new activity comment 9 years, 9 months ago
@bluejay No, that makes perfect sense.
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Daeus replied to the topic Help With Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@hannah-c Yeah, I do like it. You really got to the heart of the character in just a few words. That’s fantastic. One place I might want a little more information is on the trials she faces. What type or trials are they? Also, in the last line, you may be spelling out your theme a little too clearly. I think it might be better to phrase it more…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Why We Do This in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
Love the poem Greta.
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Daeus replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 9 months ago
Alright @bluejay. I’m finally getting to this now. First of all, the visual is amazing. I don’t know if you noticed this, but it doesn’t only just look like a cross, but it looks like a body on a cross. That’s pretty impressive.
As far as the poetry itself, there were some things that were done really well and some things that needed to become…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic The Next Book Choosing in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
Hey everyone. I can’t find a free ebook version, but if you really want to you can read it free online. Your best option if you want it free is to reserve it from the library. If you have an e-reader, you can reserve the ebook copy which should get to you within the week. If you’ve never reserved an ebook, it’s very easy and you don’t have to go…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
Hey @dragon-snapper, that’s still millions of times better than nothing.
I actually didn’t edit like I had thought I would earlier this day, but I was outside earlier and started doing some serious brainstorming about my fantasy world and I spent all this time writing my thoughts down.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
Hey @draggon-snapper, that’s still millions of times better than nothing.
I actually didn’t edit like I had thought I would earlier this day, but I was outside earlier and started doing some serious brainstorming about my fantasy world and I spent all this time writing my thoughts down.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
I am exploring new territory today.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
*Mounts sand dune. Surveys landscape* Hey ho, where are my writing friends? @kate-flournoy @bluejay @draggon-snapper @anyone else.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@winter-rose Thanks for writing. I got some decent editing done and a little bit of research.
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Daeus replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@winter-rose Sure. That’s what I was just going to do. I’ll probably go till 3.
Btw, Kate doesn’t write earlier than 7:30 EST except on Saturdays.
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@Bluejay yep, that totally makes sense.
@bluejay, agreed! 🙂