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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Ah, Just One More Thing in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@winter-rose YES IT IS! I’ve never seen it, but I’ve heard the line.
*hands you the silver and blue cloak with great epic-ness and aplomb* Congratulations. I hope I see you there, and you two @Daeus.@corissa-maiden-of-praise Your link didn’t work. Let’s see if this one does.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Ah, Just One More Thing in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
@Anne-of-Lothlorien Hey, I saw the notice for that in an Answers magazine the other day, and specifically thought I’d love to hear it. (It’d be nice to meet you, too, of course.)
As far as I know we aren’t going though. 🙁 (Probably not very possible to arrange, either—new baby soon. 🙂 ) You’ll just have to meet yourself and @Corissa-Maiden-of-P…[Read more] -
Anne of Lothlorien started the topic Ah, Just One More Thing in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 8 months ago
Hey KeePers! I’m back! For a few minutes. Because I have a question. It may not have merited it’s own thread, but I didn’t want it to get lost with all the conversation in another thread. And I knew we had a few or more personnel in the Indiana and bordering states area, so…
Is anyone else going to the Best of British Bible and Science…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Arc-What's That? in the forum Characters 7 years, 10 months ago
@rolena-hatfield @spradlin @writefury @Audrey-caylin @alia @anne-swiftblade @Hannah-c @corissa-maiden-of-praise @sleepwalkingMK
Like I said, I try to tag all the peoples…and that’s a lot of peoples. 😛 -
Daeus replied to the topic Going Live in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@leumeister @i-j-anderson @perfectfifths @ethryndal @writefury @sleepwalkingmk @the-bean @anne-of-lothlorien @julia-r @gideon-sowdon @anne-swiftblade @corissa-maiden-of-praise @jess @his-instrument @timothy-young @kate-flournoy @winter-rose @overcomer @ingridrd @faithdk @gretald @alia @hannah-c @sarah-h @jadamae @mark-kamibaya
Hey everybody, this…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic HUGE Announcement! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@s-g-dewey @aysia-serene @audrey-caylin @northerner @i-j-anderson @ethryndal @writefury @sleepwalkingmk @the-bean @anne-of-lothlorien @julia-r @gideon-sowdon @corissa-maiden-of-praise @jess @his-instrument @timothy-young @winter-rose @ingridrd @faithdk @gretald @alia @hannah-c @sarah-h @jadamae @mark-kamibaya @bluejay
Hey, y’all. Just wanted to…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic HUGE Announcement! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Howdy friends,
This is to make sure you see the announcement. If this piques your interest but you aren’t sure if it’s for you, if you have any technical questions, untechnical questions, or general comments, I’ll be here to answer them.
@s-g-dewey @aysia-serene @dragon-snapper @audrey-caylin @northerner @leumeister @i-j-anderson @perfectfifths…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise Oh yay, I’m glad you will be coming back at some point. 🙂
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Darik Swisher replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
I have found what everyone has said here very useful. but I was wondering what every one thought about multiple POVs all in first person?
@daeus @bluejay @kate-flournoy @emma-flournoy @leumeister @perfectfifths @winter-rose @overcomer @jess @writefury @corissa-maiden-of-praise @anne-of-lothlorien @alia @the-bean @mark-kamibaya @warrioroftherealm…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise Hi Corissa! Did you have a happy Christmas? How are you doing? We’ve missed you on here. 🙂
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BlueJay posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago
People who have read my Golden Conch story. Hmm…let me see. @emma-flournoy, @daeus, @winter-rose, @corissa-maiden-of-praise, @overcomer, anyone else???
I have a problem! If Claudia is at risk when she walks in the streets (and I have made it so she is, she has to have bodyguards if she leaves the palace) then she would be just at much at risk at…[Read more]-
My memory’s not perfect. Was the danger of her getting assassinated? If so, could the there just be guards at all the entrances to the ball to make sure no one is carrying weapons?
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Ah @daeus That might work.
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@Bluejay I was thinking something along those lines too…security guards of some sort in the ballroom.
Kinda hard to dance when you have bodyguards, I’m sure. 😛
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@emma-flournoy Haha. Yep, that’s what I’ve gone with.
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Daeus replied to the topic Attack this, please in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 11 months ago
Alright. Hopefully we’re good now. Can you find any way to improve it? Does it attract you? (why or why not?)
@leumeister @emma-flournoy @hope @kate-flournoy @perfectfifths @faithdk @jess @his-instrument @writefury @gretald @ingridrd @sarah-h @the-bean @mark-kamibaya @warrioroftherealm @hannah-c @ivy-rose @ethryndal @dragon-snapper @anne-swiftbla…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien started the topic What Can I Do? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 7 years, 11 months ago
“This is a story about two children. Actually, it’s story about two children and a mischievous and slightly sulky door, but I mustn’t get ahead, must I?
At birth these two children were given the names Nicholas Wilbur Rothelburg and Scarlett Jaylie Rothelburg. They also happened to have been given these names at almost the exact same time, on the…[Read more] -
Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic What Is It? in the forum Poetry 7 years, 11 months ago
@daeus Thanks. That makes is clearer. I should try one of those sometimes.
@hope is dauntless, and a little weird
Her writing is notorious and her wit is feared
To be on the end of her razor sharp mind
Is a scarring experience, I’m sure you will findHer books are well written and quite enthralling
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 7 years, 11 months ago
@bluejay Yah, I cried too, at the beginning, when I knew his parents would die cause how else would he get stranded in the woods, when he had to choose between Elliot and his ‘family’ and even at the end when he found Elliot again. I wasn’t expecting that, but I guess they weren’t happy to leave it like the old one, where he never sees them again.…[Read more]
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Julia R. replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien: I have written a short Choose-your-own-Adventure story in second person. It was fun, but incredibly difficult! I can’t imagine doing 2nd person in any other way than a CYOA. That’s one thing I never liked about CYOA’s. Sometimes, they would say things like, “If you decide to chase after the criminal, go to page 8. If you…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I used to ONLY write third person, and I had no idea if it was omnipotent, or omnipresent, or whatever. Still don’t quite remember those. @Daeus what are those things?
But now I write mostly in first person. I like focusing on one person personally better, and it lets me put in weird thoughts that I probably wouldn’t if it was third person.
But…[Read more]
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic First or Third? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 11 months ago
I used to ONLY write third person, and I had no idea if it was omnipotent, or omnipresent, or whatever. Still don’t quite remember those. @Daeus what are those things?
But now I write mostly in first person. I like focusing on one person personally better, and it lets me put in weird thoughts that I probably wouldn’t if it was third person.
But…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Quote That in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 12 months ago
@Writefury @Corissa-Maiden-of-Praise technically you’re both right! I did mean it as what Rosey guessed, but Eustace works too. 😀
@Emma-Flournoy, it’s ‘Just take what’s given and say goodbye.’
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Rosey Mucklestone replied to the topic Blank Mastermind in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 years, 12 months ago
@Corissa-Maiden-of-Praise Thought you’d like that. XD I might… that was just the part that I kept looking back at and thinking it might be fun to do from Dallas’s POV. Him and all his obsessive ‘sir’ and ‘mister’ use….
What about Wolfgang’s injuries? Holy smoke, I need to give both of them a break…
Yep! My sister drew it. If you look…[Read more]
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Hullo Sarah! Thanks so much for asking! I’ve had a very busy schedule recently, and I’m not sure when it will calm down enough for me to be back on here regular. 🙁 I had a wonderful Christmas and can’t wait until I’m able to join the conversations again! God bless you!
@corissa-maiden-of-praise Oh yay, I’m glad you will be coming back at some point. 🙂