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Daeus replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@emma-flournoy Sure. You can share Mallory’s doc if you want. 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus Ahh, I remember that post! It was intriguing. I’d like to do it, unless you’re already too swamped with beta-readers, in which case I’d still want to just read it. ;P
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hey Everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 4 months ago
Aahh! That does sound disappointing. I like Almanzo well enough, but not to replace the Ingalls. :'(
No, we’re not to Nellie’s marriage yet, but I’m pretty sure it’s in this season (which you probably know, which is probably why you asked. ;P). I can certainly imagine it would be funny.
A NEW FAMILY moves into the Ingalls’ house?!…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character Art Exchange #2 in the forum Art 8 years, 4 months ago
@mariposa You, my dear, astonish me!!! That is…wow.
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Daeus replied to the topic Alternatives to flashbacks? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 4 months ago
@itisastarrynight I think one big thing that makes flashbacks seem cheesy is when the chapter before the flashback ends with something like, “he remembered the time thirteen years ago when blakedy blank blank…” If you can avoid that, it should really help.
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LivGiordano and
itisastarrynight are now friends 8 years, 4 months ago -
ClaireC and
Ethryndal are now friends 8 years, 4 months ago -
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Hey Everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 4 months ago
@clairec Thanks for the welcome! Y’all make me feel so at home, and I love it. 🙂
@jenwriter17 Thank you! I was really excited and surprised that I was in the newsletter. 😉 Yes, writing has definitely made much more of an observer. I love it.
@emilyd Oh cool! I love an Australian accent. 😉 I’m not really into mystery, so not many. XD When I…[Read more]
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 4 months ago
@radically-surrendered Hi! I thought I’d let you know that I tagged you for the Liebster Award on my blog. If you’ve seen it that’s fine, but one of the rules is to notify the people you tagged… so I thought I’d notify you. XD
https://silverphoenixwriter.blogspot.com/2018/01/secondary-introduction-liebster-award.html
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ClaireC replied to the topic Hey Everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 4 months ago
@emily-d, you’re an Aussie? Welcome to the Certified Club of Aussie Kapeefers! Are you new? I apologise if you’ve been here for a while and I’ve missed you, I haven’t been around for a while, and so many new people have joined while I’ve been away! 😉
@sleepwalkingmk, just like all the crazy Aussies who are awake in the middle of the night! 😀
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ClaireC posted an update 8 years, 4 months ago
Woah. I can’t believe we’ve both been on this forum for so long and a) I never ‘friended’ you, and b) I didn’t discover your blog till yesterday. YESTERDAY! And I have to say I’ve never laughed so hard in my life before. Tears were flowing. I sometimes laugh like that with my family (they’re nearly as funny as yours! 😉 ) but I don’t normally…[Read more]
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‘Unfriends’ we are no longer. 😉
BUT THIS MAKES ME HAPPY. Seriously. My blog gave you LAUGHY TEARS!!! When I started it, I honestly just wanted to bring a little joy to the world, so when people tell me that it made them laugh, or it brightened their day a little, or whatever… It’s terribly fulfilling.
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My mum loved the severed wampa arm cake. I would have done exactly the same thing. 😛 I dissected a fish today, and this is a picture of it by the time I’d finished. My thoughts during the process were disturbingly Gollum-like. “Aren’t we a nice little fishiessssss. Looks! there’sss your liversessssss!” 😀
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I don’t actually know how to post a picture, so let me keep trying! 😉
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I’ve tagged you.
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ROCK AND POOL, IT’S NICE AND COOL, SO JUICY SWEEEEEEET….
That is so stuck in my head now… XD “Look at the fishiesss! Nice fishiesss. Smeagol eats the tasssty little fisshieess…”
Isn’t it scary how sometimes in real life, you’ll start mentally referring to yourself in the third person? I’ll accidentally make a mistake, and find myself…[Read more]
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I know! 😀 I haven’t even watched the movie, just read The Hobbit, and starting LOTR soon. But a friend of mine and I often swap Gollum and Bilbo’s riddles…
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Well sheesh. The first part of my comment probably just went completely over your head then.
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Oh, no, don’t worry, I got it. 😛
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When you’re a part of a community like this, you can’t stay in LOTR ignorance for very long!
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Alternatives to flashbacks? in the forum Plotting 8 years, 4 months ago
@atisastarrynight I personally love flashbacks, and I think they can be great if done well. I’m thinking of a certain person who is really good at doing this, but isn’t on KP, unfortunately. 🙁
But yes, have something trigger a memory. Keep it short. You definitely don’t have to info dump. Just let your character remember something, but not all…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Hey Everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 4 months ago
@livgiordano. Hey! Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet…which I’m sure everyone has already said. But hey! why not?
Glad to have you here!
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Would You Read This? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@waterlily Oh wow. This sounds so awesome. I would totally read this.
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Daeus replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@overcomer Great. 😀
Here’s a doc for you. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BIHK8v-ag07-tPraj6QWrbf_BVN2P_PjySIw87Ljfyg/edit?usp=sharing
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Hey Everyone! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 4 months ago
@sleepwalkingmk oh HEY ADORA!!! So cool to see you here! And you’re an MK? Somehow I totally missed that before. XD
@itisastarrynight that sounds way too awesome! I love that idea!
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LivGiordano replied to the topic How do we define "worth" when there is no actual God figure in the story? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 8 years, 4 months ago
Ohh @itisastarrynight you cannot imagine how helpful this is for me. It’s like the biggest AHA moment ever. Okay. Thank you, thank you, a million times over. Everyone’s advice is finally making sense. That MAKES SO MUCH SENSE. Seriously. You’re totally awesome now. 😉 (not that you weren’t before, but I just got a taste of that awesomeness for the…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic The Diary Of Nameless in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
If you’re still looking for readers, @daeus , I’m more than willing. My local libraries have been a desert lately, so I’m good and bored and full of unrealistically high expectations.
Which means I’m ripe for giving criticism– er, feedback. 😉 🙂
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Hannah replied to the topic Help: Explaining to Math kids in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Thanks for the links! I’ll definitely check them out!
They’d probably be great friends. XD
Thanks! I’ll check it out.
Wish me luck, as I’ve got to have *something* ready for him tomorrow…
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