Cloudy

Cool beans. @jane-maree @cloudy

@jane-maree @cloudy I’ll be here for 15-30min, y’all still here?

@Cloudy thanks! 😀
ooh *stalks*

@Cloudy Heeyyy welcome. 😀
This is my project: A Sprig of Green

@winter-rose That’ll do. 😛 Besides, your title actually works as a name. My book doesn’t.
@cloudy Ah, cleaning. Bye!

@cloudy I’m beta-reading…a book, I guess. Not sure how much information I’m allowed to expound in it, so I’ll just stick with that. 😛
@winter-rose Hi, Rook.

@cloudy Hi! I’m beta-reading.

@Cloudy sorry I’ve been so long getting back! 😛 What @GracieGirl said; also in some places I felt that you jumped too quickly from deep, in the moment scenes to hurried overviews. To fix that, you should probably make lines for scene breaks, and make your deep in the moment scenes even deeper, while your overviews can either be shortened, or…[Read more]

I have an answer . . . but I’m more curious what @Leumeister @Charisetter @f5a8c3e92 @RadicalGlitter @Cloudy will say–if they say anything at all.

@DonyClark I actually listen to music more than I watch it, but let me tag a few others for you who might better be able to answer your question. 🙂

@Leumeister @Mark-Kamibaya @Charisetter @f5a8c3e92 @RadicalGlitter @Cloudy

@Cloudy So sorry it’s taken me this long to get back to you! Life is crazy.

Okay, first off, I want to tell you that I think this story is an intriguing idea to say the least. 🙂 And my favorite part was the plot twist at the end about Henry’s wife. *double thumbs up* 😀

As far as pacing, I think it’s actually pretty good for most of the time.…[Read more]

@Cloudy just want to let you know I haven’t abandoned you; I’m going through the story bit by bit and formulating thoughts and such. 😉

Um, @cloudy I wanted to know what bloody fingerprints looked like because they’re in my WIP and I wanted to describe them better than ‘bloody fingerprints’ so I waited until the next time I was bleeding (hangnail) and smeared some on my finger and pressed it on the paper.

@Cloudy I could try, but I don’t have a ton of experience with critiquing. This week is a little weird for me too so if its very long I might not be able to get through all of it.
Are you just wanting to see how the plot feels to a reader or did you want more of proofread where I’d look at syntax and flow?

@Cloudy I’d love to but unfortunately I don’t have time right at this moment. If you’d like to give me a link to the doc (I assume it’s in a google doc?) I can save it and get to it when I have time, though.

@cloudy A novel! But not just any novel… a novel novel XD 😉 😀

@cloudy – thank you very much for the welcome! 🙂 Happy to make your acquaintance 🙂

@cloudy Oh, there’s nothing wrong with us writers. It’s the rest of the world that makes no sense. 😉