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@Dragon-Snapper @salome01w4g Welcome, welcome, and hello. *waves*

@salome01w4g @seekjustice @jane-maree I’m here! Write/edit time!

@SeekJustice I’m here to join you!! I have two chapters to critique/edit.

I’ll be worldbuilding for awhile if anyone wants to join me. @shannon @dragon-snapper @xonos-darkgrate

Ah, but see, therein lies the wittiness of my comment…for in telling you I wasn’t going to make a comment, I also reflected my disdain, no? @xonos-darkgrate

@princessfoo I’m going to refrain from making a comment about Rogue One.

@winter-rose I blame @xonos-darkgrate‘s profile pic. XD

@Catwing yay good job! See you around. 🙂

@salome01w4g alrighty! Sleep well, girl. *waves*

@Catwing sounds like fun!! I’m halfway through chapter 37 (of Hope Ann’s novel Fidelyon) and it’s pretty good. *nodnod*

@Catwing @Salome01w4g I am here to join you! I’ll be critiquing/editing.

@catwing Oh dear. It ate him…

I’ve got to go now. I edited quite a bit. 😀

@catwing Maybe to Jack it would appear that the flashlight appeared out of nowhere? Like, he can’t see the fairy yet, because he doesn’t know they exist. He doesn’t believe in them yet?

@catwing Gotta love the humor! 😛

Hey catwing, go outline. 😉

Suddenly, a flashlight appeared out of nowhere. Jack put his hand on his head, clenching at his hair! “Goodness me! A flashlight! My requests have been answered!”

@catwing Yes! Isn’t editing so much fun!

I’m going through and killing all the telling, and making my sarcastic character ten times as snarky. It’s awesome. 😛 I’m about 16, maybe 17% through with editing. Making progress. 😀

I’ve been able to incorporate world building too, which I decided to do after I wrote the book. *hides under piles of…[Read more]

@catwing Hiya! I’m editing too!

I…yeah, I’d appreciate Hannah. Just for my schoolwork in general. @salome01w4g

@salome01w4g @that_writer_Girl_99 Time for dinner! Have fun with ethics and novels that don’t want to be written! 😀

Erm, let’s not talk about my test.

@dragon-snapper It’s actually a relatively…doable class, all things considered.