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@Aislinn-mollisong it looks great, but I’ve seen that image floating around and I’m pretty sure it’s not free; did you find the artist and ask for copyright license?

But as far as composition and layout, it looks great. The only thing is you might want to consider a slightly bolder, straighter font. Something more in tune with the fantasy mood.

Here’s a link to an article I found: https://www.hunker.com/12587271/what-cuts-through-steel

@ethryndal

You know you’re a writer when you google to see what kinds of materials can cut through steel… @dragon-snapper @ethryndal @kate-flournoy

Farewell @Aislinn-mollisong

@Catwing okay, see you!! *salutes*

I’m gonna tag @daeus because he’ll probably be able to tell you more than I can.

In my opinion, this is a bit too long, and it reveals a bit too much about the story. I can’t tell you how or where to cut, but that’s just my thought. You want to keep a bit of the story to reveal later, right?

@allison-grace We all are. 😀

@Dragon-Snapper Okay byeee. See you in the future. 😀

@catwing @jane-maree I’m signing out now. I wrote 1085 and edited almost a chapter. Byeee!!!
*and then I shall makes some collages. Yessss..*

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@catwing Ew. Please cough. Just cough. Be human just this once.

@Emma-Flournoy @Mariposa Thanks! And yess, I picked the name Rosso because of her hair. 😛

Byeee @DaughteroftheKing!

@catwing *hands you cough medicine*

@catwing Yessssssss.

@Kate-Flournoy thanks! They’re pretty fun characters as far as I’ve brainstormed of them at this stage.

@Catwing Aw thank you. ^-^ The girl (Megan) is actually a ninja, and Dylan doesn’t have powers either. It’s a superhero story…but the two main characters aren’t actually superheroes. It’s still in the brainstorming stage currently, and I’ve…[Read more]

@catwing I am writing a scene which launches everything exciting about this novel! Villains with character arcs! Ah ha! Ah ha!

@jane-maree Going pretty good. The writing is interesting. It’s…first draft.

@Catwing (sorry, I didn’t see yours before) I’m working on the second book in my dystopian trilogy. Agent Kit. 🙂

@DaughterOfTheKing Heyo. *waves* 😛

@Dragon-Snapper HELLOOOO. *hands you some pizza* How’s it going?

@Aislinn-Mollisong I have never used Canva, but @Hope has had a very good experience with it, so yes. That could be another option.