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Cloudy posted an update 9 years ago

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qbaZGzV9ZSeT4Pr-EXYyyj4BaBKecEqYwgTK2wmf0JI/edit?usp=sharing
Okay! @sage-g Welcome abord! I’ll give you the link to the stories. They’re already on one doc. I advise opening up the doc outline so it’s easier. Read and comment at your leisure. I just need help on all of the different parts. XD
Don’t worry about only commenting. Suggestions would be greatly appreciated.
(I’m so dumb. I basically sent the email without the attachment XD)
- Sage G replied 9 years ago
  
  Hi @cloudy! So, I managed to go through 5 parts today.
  Your story is really interesting, and I’m having a lot of fun working on it!
  (Also, I hope I did it right, not too familiar with google docs >.<)
  - Cloudy replied 9 years ago
    
    @sage-g You did just fine. Thanks! I was surprised how much you were working on yesterday. Btw, it’s not required but you can comment, e.g.: I like this bit, Change this paragraph, your sentences feel too choppy here. Stuff like that. But only if you want to. 🙂
    - Sage G replied 9 years ago
      
      @cloudy I just finished your story, and I really enjoyed it! Your ideas were very unique, and creative.
      One little thing I want to mention, is that during character dialog, you only indented the lines toward the end; I would suggest indenting all conversation.
      Anyway, I hope I was helpful to you, it was fun! 🙂