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@shannon, I need your opinion, and basically, tell me what you would change. If a sentence comes off wrong, or a word should be different. Spelling is a side issue, and I can handle that on my own. But fragmented words, and sentences would be nice to know about. Basically, read my story as if you were a reader, reading it for pleasure, and tell me what you think, and wha ti should consider changing. So, I’ll give you a link to the folder if you give your final word: yes. 😀