Cloudy

I’ve been here on KP for a MUUUUCH shorter time, than many people here. Perhaps even most(or all) of them. I’ve participated much less as well, but I do think this site has been extremely helpful. 🙂 Honestly, I do read this site more often than you think, but I lurk in the shadows because….I’m batman.

@daeus, no it’s just chatting, like what we’re doing on the forum, just quicker in a sort of chatroom mode. I respect your self-restraint though. 🙂

@that_writer_girl_99, I like what you have so far. Honestly, to me, it sounds like a (long) short story or a novella/novelette. I can see what people are saying about cliches and things, and you have to be careful, but from what I’ve read, so far it seems pretty original. 🙂 I would add, you and @Jess have a habit of saying do not instead od…[Read more]

@daeus, thank you ever so much! Your critique will be carefully considered. 🙂

@delightinlife
I read your story and so far, to me it looks good. I don’t have a suggestion for a title because honestly, I didn’t quite know what was going on. You dropped me into another world with fighting and everything…That happened way too quickly. I know this is beta and you’re just starting out, but I’d say, write a little more of the…[Read more]

@delight in life
I read your story and so far, to me it looks good. I don’t have a suggestion for a title because honestly, I didn’t quite know what was going on. You dropped me into another world with fighting and everything…That happened way too quickly. I know this is beta and you’re just starting out, but I’d say, write a little more of the…[Read more]

I was doing some research and this may turn into a novellette (considering I think it will probably be around 7K-10K words…I don’t know… I’ve started to write and I think I’m either going to fast or my rough draft is going to be shorter than I expected. @kate-flournoy @jess @dragon-snapper @graciegirl

I was doing some research and this may turn into a novellette (considering I think it will probably be around 7K-10K words…I don’t know… I’ve started to write and I think I’m either going to fast or my rough draft is going to be shorter than I expected. @kate-flournoy @jess @dragon-snapper

@jess. We’ve discussed this but I think it is geared more towards beginners. Because we have only viewed the samples we can’t say for sure. I am definitely going to be doing it. I think you could still use the practice with this curriculum even if you’re an expert. And someone please answer her question about the conference. I want to know so badly.

@jess What is OYAN?

I have problems with flipping things in the middle. At first, it was my sign hand (which one should be dominant), then I had a little trouble with figuring out my narration, and now it’s my prose. I guess these things come and go with me. But back to the topic, you’re absolutely right, I need to figure that out. @kate-flournoy

I have problems with flipping things in the middle. At first, it was my sign hand (which one should be dominant), then I had a little trouble with figuring out my narration, and now it’s my prose. I guess these things come and go with me. But back to the topic, you’re absolutely right, I need to figure that out.

@kate-flournoy Thanks. I guess that’s true. Thanks for the advice. I like your new profile picture. Have you read taming of the shrew? Because I have, and it’s making me think of a glorious plot twist! OH YES! I HAVE FOUND MY CAMP NANOWRIMO SUBJECT! WOOP WOOP!!!!!! THANK YOU, KATE, DEAR, SWEET KATE!!! (From real life and Ficitional)