@cloudy
Active 6 years, 10 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Cloudy replied to the topic Hey there! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 4 months ago
Hello @Alison-grace, welcome! I hope you feel at home here! Yeah, fantasy! Woop woop! Ohio! My family started there, and my great-grandma still lives in Lima. 2 questions:
1. Do you go for Ohio State (hehehe)
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Cloudy replied to the topic Hey there! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 4 months ago
Hello AAlison-grace, welcome! I hope you feel at home here! Yeah, fantasy! Woop woop! Ohio! My family started there, and my great-grandma still lives in Lima. 2 questions:
1. Do you go for Ohio State (hehehe)
2. What is Y-dubbing? -
Cloudy replied to the topic Hey there! in the forum Start HERE 7 years, 4 months ago
Hello Alison, welcome! I hope you feel at home here! Yeah, fantasy! Woop woop! Ohio! My family started there, and my great-grandma still lives in Lima. 2 questions:
1. Do you go for Ohio State (hehehe)
2. What is Y-dubbing? -
Cloudy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Hey @dragon-snapper I’m free. 🙂
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Cloudy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #7 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
Hey @draggon-snapper I’m free. 🙂
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Cloudy replied to the topic The Healer's Curse Short Story Critique in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
Thanks @kate-flournoy, don’t worry, late critique is better than none. 🙂
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Cloudy posted an update 7 years, 4 months ago
Thanks @dragon-snapper
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Cloudy posted an update 7 years, 4 months ago
Thanks, @kate-flournoy, I’ll do some hard thinking. 🙂
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Cloudy posted an update 7 years, 4 months ago
OYAN is coming along nicely! I NEED HELP!!! MY MAIN MALE CHARACTER IS TOO PERFECT! At this point I’m just creating my ideal husband. @kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99
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@Cloudy *chokes* I can see why that might be giving you problems. XD
Uhhh… my first advice would be see if you can find it in your heart to figure out his faults. Or maybe it’s your approach to him that’s the difficulty; maybe you need to analyze yourself. Do you admire him, or understand him? Is he an ideal, or a living breathing human? Can…[Read more]
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@cloudy Hmmm…… Mostly what Kate said…make him not so perfect. Do whatever you have to do to make it that way. Maybe if you need to, write a random scene (that won’t be put into your WIP) where he is the badguy. Or the henchman. Or a kid being bullied at school. Or being bullied.
But otherwise, what Kate said. 😛
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I’m not sure I can say anything that hasn’t been said already, but here goes:
All people have flaws. Remember this. Guys…well. They have a lot of flaws. Some of them talk to much. Some of them talk too little. Some of them struggle with pride, some of them struggle with insecurity. Everyone has something they struggle with, and that thing can…[Read more]
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Cloudy replied to the topic What makes a good music video? in the forum Music 7 years, 4 months ago
Personally, I think that music videos are not necessary. I personally like to listen to the music, close my eyes and jam out. Besides music videos are just stinking weird. I think music videos by people such as Peter Hollens, showing how many tracks of audio are needed to make the song are better. Thanks for the reccomendation @Mark-Kambaya
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Cloudy replied to the topic The Healer's Curse Short Story Critique in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 4 months ago
Thank you for reading and critiquing! Thanks for the compliment on the plot twist. I was a little nervous about how that would shake down. @graciegirl
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Cloudy posted an update 7 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy It’s fine! Take your time! I’m in the progress of writing a whole bunch of other short stories for my Nano Project. I’m going to edit them all after July. Or if I finish soon enough, I’ll edit them later this month. I so, I don’t want you to rush or feel bad about not getting back to me. It’s fine.
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Cloudy posted an update 7 years, 5 months ago
I’ve dug myself into a hole. I asked my readers to help me write a story, and the story they came up with that I have to write is: Civil war era, aliens adventure story….WHERE DO I BEGIN? If I figured out the beginning I don’t think it would be that hard. *sigh*
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Cloudy replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
Wow, how did you manage that? @anne-of-lothlorien
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Cloudy replied to the topic Would You Rather Writing Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 5 months ago
I personally have edges chewed off. And come to think of it, my cats sometimes do that already. XD @anne-of-lothlorien
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Cloudy replied to the topic The Healer's Curse Short Story Critique in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
@graciegirl It’s only about 5K words, and yeah, it would be nice if you read it to give me a feel for the plot and pacing. I think the pacing’s a little off.
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Cloudy replied to the topic The Healer's Curse Short Story Critique in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
@graciegirl It’s only about 5K words, and yeah, it would be nice if you read it to give me a feel for the plot and pacing. I think the pacing’s a little off.
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Cloudy replied to the topic The Healer's Curse Short Story Critique in the forum Short Story Critiques 7 years, 5 months ago
@gracieigr It’s only about 5K words, and yeah, it would be nice if you read it to give me a feel for the plot and pacing. I think the pacing’s a little off.
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