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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien AHH those are great!
Waaaaait, did you copy mine? XD
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@warrioroftherealm *salutes* Awesome!
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@christianna-hellwig @rochellaine @emma-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99
Thanks so much for your suggestions, everyone! Here’s what I have now.
“Oh, stars that remember the firstthings forgotten
How earth and its peoples were early begotten
They looked and beheld through a pane of dark glass
The earth in a swirling, untamable mass
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@christianna-hellwig Thanks so much! I’ll take a look over this as soon as I get a chance.
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Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
@skredder I’ve seen that movie! Unfortunately I’m pretty sure it’s her last name
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Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
@ingridrd Yes it’s a girl. … Can Peregrine be a girl’s name?
@rochellaine That’s funny — I was JUST on that site! Unfortunately I didn’t find names I like :-/
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@emma-flournoy Ha! Well, we’ll see. I’d certainly love to.
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@emma-flournoy Sure, here’s one. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oV9qnLtpy4Cwn8-JFfJaXzOn4A5-yqRBR-AqlFIyYdk/edit?usp=sharing
Yeah, song creation and all that. I probably should have come up with something more original, but in my defense the song creation is the basis for the whole magical system, the last book’s allegorical aspects, and the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @rochellaine Thanks. 😀
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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@rochellaine @jenali @epicaddie2 @the-real-kapeefer
Thank you all! 😀
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Joy replied to the topic Character Name Exchange in the forum Fantasy 8 years, 2 months ago
@waterlily @rochellaine @skredder @ingridrd @anyone
Peri can be a nickname, right? What are some names that can have a nickname of Peri?
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 More for metric pattern, but either one.
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Daniel DeGraaf replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
This is awesome, that you for your work.
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Daeus started the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Any of you who write structured poetry, I could use a bit of help with a poem I’ve written. This is for the fantasy novel I’m writing and essentially recounts the first events of the world.
My problem is that I know a few spots have clunky meter. I generally have a good ear for meter and maybe I could fix this by myself, but…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Unlikable Protagonist? in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
@introvert_girl Sam really said it already, but you can also add a backstory to show why the character acts the way they do. The overall tone of the story will help too. I think though that the most important thing is proactivity, like Sam said.
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Joy replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99Â KP-versary! Congrats!
Many hugs to my fellow Whovian 😉
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@catwing I could always use more advice 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
@sam-kowal *is honored that you think me a hero in dragondom*
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