Cindy

@gh24682468999 I support what @perfectfifths said. It sounds though like your main problem is not that you aren’t showing reactions, but that you feel like you have too many and it’s cluttering your prose.

I assume you’re using action tags (i.e. Sam put on his glasses. “Don’t I look cool in these?”)

Action tags are extremely helpful to a story.…[Read more]

@epicaddie2 Welcome!
@that_writer_Girl_99 Motion Picture class? That sounds like so much fun! I’ve looked into scriptwriting before, and yeah, the format is odd. I find Times Roman much more friendly. 😛

@salome01w4g @daeus @that_writer_Girl_99 @catwing @epicaddie2 I’m writing now, and might do some editing later, but whoever wants to join me…

@salome01w4g @catwing Welp, I’m signing out now. I wrote 1030!

And thank you so much for the popcorn and ice cream! He helped me get past the really really really really really dry chapter/scene! 😀

@salome01w4g Popcorn!! Popcorn and swords! Give me!

@salome01w4g Swords!!!

Man, I kinda miss those.

@catwing Hiya!

I will take the ice cream!

@seekjustice @daughteroftheking @catwing @daeus @epicaddie2 Me and my headphones are going to force Dragon Snapper to write this terrible chapter.

Who’s with me?

@catwing No! No! *facepalm*

Here. If I must be Chosen Kid, then there’s also Chosen King and Chosen Kate. The Three Chosen ‘K’s. XD

But I’ll go by Chosen One.

@daeus @kate-flournoy

@kate-flournoy 7-8pm

@jane-maree That first one is cool! I especially like that picture in the corner with the girl and the stars. And the characters in the second collage look like people I’d want to get to know. 🙂

@salome01w4g That castle is epic.

@salome01w4g There will be a replay.

@catwing Chosen One the younger? XD

@catwing I’m signing off now. I wrote 636…not particularly great seeing as I had an hour…but meh. It’s a dry chapter. And that was a pun…because well, they’re in the desert. HAHAHAHAHA!

Enjoy your scratching post. 😛

@catwing Why, melting of course.

@that_writer_Girl_99 Heh…I think now would be a good time for you to mentor the chosen one… 😉
jk
@catwing Sorry sorry. Here, take this. *hands you a lovely pole for scratching with*

@livylynn Hi hi and hi! Welcome to our realm on the internets! I’m Dragon Snapper and perhaps you’ve noticed that I melt chairs. Why and how that came about…I…[Read more]

@catwing *melts random chair that you were using as a scratching post*