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@xonos-darkgrate @allison-grace @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @catwing @epicaddie2 I’ll be here for a bit characterizing.

Another one by Snapper? What?

Well, I couldn’t resist. You all are a bad influence on someone who should be writing instead of spending an hour on these things.

This one is for the last book of the trilogy, the problem child, but I finally found a plot for it!!!!
So here it is.

@ingridrd @jessi-rae @winter-rose @daughteroftheking @kate-flou…[Read more]

@daeus Well…you said that you were going to write it as if it were his diary. I think it would be just as fine without. It’s seems as if the dates are extra. Write it in first person, but not as if he’s writing in his diary. … Also, I didn’t think that you’d go through different parts of his diary when I wrote that…and I also forgot that…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99 That’s what I’m confused about. This story is written in first person. You must be suggesting a different style within the boundaries of first person.

@perfectfifths Thanks 🙂

@dragon-snapper @that_writer_girl_99 I’m not sure I know what you mean. How would writing it from his POV be different? I thought I would write it diary style because he will only get to re-enter into the story on certain days.

@dragon-snapper Neat! I like that quote about her heart being a flower.

This one is for Tallore too, but it defines him a bit more. @mariposa @shannon @emily @kate-flournoy @catwing @ingridrd @daughteroftheking @jessi-rae

And don’t forget that’s he’s Dyemon’s brother.

@catwing Man with a gun…mysterious catwing with a gun. That would be creepy. 😛

@daeus Hey! That is a pretty neat concept! I love how he gets to be the heroes neighbor. That’s awesome.

I agree with @perfectfifths that you should continue this, however, I think it’d be better if you didn’t write it from the perspective of his diary, and instead just his POV, first person.

But that’s it really. Otherwise I love it!

@his-instrument Porgs are definitely Snoke’s secret minions… 😉

*double facepalm* And I used the wrong form of ‘your’. My apologies, grammar fairies.

Why do I always forget about my own topics? *facepalm*

So first off @daeus You’re point about the lessons to be learned does open up a lot. I planned the second book by plotting out the theme first…I guess I should do that again, just for a national scale. And indeed it works very well. And usually, I would plot it out from beginning to end, I…[Read more]

@allison-grace I follow the system taught by K.M.Wieland. It’s excellent as many others on here will testify. She has written several books on the subject and she has a series of articles on her blog covering the subject as well.

In her system, there are 18 major plot points. I like to have all of these down before I start writing. On top of…[Read more]

@xonos-darkgrate I think the youngest person we have is 13–that’s how old I was when I joined but then time happened so now I’m older…. XD

@xonos-darkgrate As far as the magic goes, I think it probably needs a bit more fleshing out with details, but as long as the power isn’t actually God’s power, but merely a separate power he created, I think you’re on the right track.

As for romance, it’s really up to you. It could be hard to write it without any experience and you do want to…[Read more]

@ethryndal I don’t think I want to meet your…er…other very cool personage. 😉
@dragon-snapper Cool!
@daughteroftheking I love all the photos in your collage. It reminds me of beauty and the beast.

@xonos-darkgrate Good ideas. The one thing that confuses me is point 1. It sounds strange that Satan could manipulate God’s power. Maybe there’s there’s an outside force of power that God created and controls as a testing ground? I’m sure you’ll figure it all out.

@aislinn-mollisong …I guess I just have a lot of sidekicks. 😀
@catwing 😀 *chairs sit there, awaiting destruction*
@jane-maree *resists taking it all*
Goodnight guys! I’m headed out now!