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Joy started the topic Thirteen Plus Five in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 11 months ago
My Doctor Who novella sample. What do you think?
@daeus, @graciegirl, @that_writer_girl_99, @lady-iliara, @dragon-snapper, @catwing, @jane-maree, @kate-flournoy, @salome01w4g, @Any more Whovians out there?
“We’ve changed course.”
“What do you mean we’ve changed course?”
“I mean we’ve changed course, Alfred.”
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Daeus replied to the topic The Red Dragon in the forum Poetry 8 years, 11 months ago
@lady-iliara *thumbs up*
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Joy replied to the topic SoOoO.. in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@ck4always Welcome back! Yes, I am a stranger. No, we’ve never met. I’m Dekreel. Nice to meet you!
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Joy replied to the topic Cover Feedback in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 11 months ago
@daeus That’s pretty cool! I would add more shadow to the ziggurat and then lightly sketch in a bit of mountains or buildings or desert (or wherever you ziggurat is) in the background so it doesn’t look like it’s just floating in the middle of nowhere. It would look more like it was actually a place, instead of like a mystical thing. 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic 2nd person mystery? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@daeus :-O :-O That sounds like the coolest thing ever! I wonder if it’s possible to make it one of those choose-your-own-adventure stories. That would be pretty cool.
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Joy replied to the topic Lady Iliara greets thee! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@lady-iliara Greetings!! My name is Dekreel. I am fully honored to meet you, m’lady! *bows humbly*
Wow, you are practically my role model! Acting, singing, drawing, writing… I like those things, too! (Although my acting skills leave room for improvement… 🙂 )
I also like words! Unfortunately I suffer a permanent tip-of-the-tongue!…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic Su cuy'gar! (Translation: Hello!) in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
So very welcome, @supermonkey42!! My name’s Dekreel. Glad you’re here! 😉
SO, you’re a huge Star Wars fan? I’m more of a Doctor Who fan, but I also like Star Wars. 🙂 I need to watch it again. I liked Episode 7, and am excited about episode 8! Have you seen Rogue One? Is it any good? -
Daeus replied to the topic Lady Iliara greets thee! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@sarah-anson Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet!
Ah, your brain sounds fun. Who could ever stand to be normal?
I’m yet unsure whether I’ll be doing NaNo. If I can create three languages and draw a world map before I go to bed, then I’ll almost be ready maybe…
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Daeus replied to the topic Lady Iliara greets thee! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@shannon I believe so.
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Daeus replied to the topic Lady Iliara greets thee! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@lady-iliara *grimace* That is, thankfully, the first time I’ve ever done that.
Well, you should fit in well here. There’s a lot of INFPs.
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Daeus replied to the topic Lady Iliara greets thee! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@lady-iliara Really? Haha! ENFJs forever!!!!!! (I’m an ENFJ) How sad I couldn’t guess my own type. 😮 *shakes head* I guess I should have latched onto the fact that you wanted to read through all the forum topics for a sense of completion.
Whenever you get done with writing about hobbits eating pancakes, make sure to post it on here. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Su cuy'gar! (Translation: Hello!) in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
@supermonkey42 Wait, wait. Are you actually a male? Sorry, that’s just really rare here. May you wear a black cloak all your days and writer’s block ever flee from you.
Fyi, The Last Jedi trailer is probably more exciting for me than most movies I’ve watched. 😉
Oh, I forgot to say welcome. 😛 Ooops. Welcome to the bestistest place on the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Lady Iliara greets thee! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 11 months ago
Hi, @lady-iliara. 🙂 Chocolate and raspberries be upon you.
I can try to guess your type. ENFP? I’m at least sticking with P.
What do you write? And what do you sing? (equally important)
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Daeus replied to the topic 2nd person mystery? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
@emily I’m not really worried about 2nd person being too hard. My main question is whether it would be too weird for someone to read a mystery only to find out that they are the criminal. 😉
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Daeus started the topic 2nd person mystery? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 11 months ago
Hi KeePers,
What do you think about me writing a 2nd person short detective story?
The twist is that the POV character would be both the detective and *spoiler* the criminal.
I have no idea what the plot would be. 😛
Am I crazy or is this actually conceivable?
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Joy replied to the topic Fairytale Expectations in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@ethryndal The things that came to my mind were…
Sparkles. Lots of sparkles.
Singing. Everybody singing.
A princess with a beautiful crown in a large, elegant castle.
Fairies taking care of the crops, the plants and the animals.
Color, optimism and joy all around.Basically every little girl’s dreams come true
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Daeus replied to the topic Cover Feedback in the forum Publishing & Platform 8 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy I used this guy. He gets my thumbs up. I don’t know how he gets away with charging so little. http://bookcovermall.com/custom-design
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Daeus started the topic Cover Feedback in the forum 8 years, 11 months ago
Hi KeePers,
I just got a cover design for a short story I’m writing and I wanted to get your feedback on it.
I personally am very happy with the sharp, clean design, but I do think there’s room for a tiny bit more detail. I’m thinking maybe I should add some very subtly ominous feature, but I’m not sure what that should be. Or maybe the…[Read more]
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Mariposa Aristeo replied to the topic Fairytale Expectations in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@ethryndal Hmm…when I think of fairytales what comes to mind is apples, slippers, princesses, magic mirrors, stepmothers and stepsisters, castles, knights, dragons, fairies, elves, dwarfs, trolls, love’s first kiss, sleeping, roses, being betrothed to a guy you don’t want to marry due to the royal marriage customs, swans, frogs, talking f…[Read more]
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