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Snapper replied to the topic Character Outlines in the forum Characters 10 years ago
Thank you, @mark-kamibaya! That was very helpful; same to you, @jess. By family, I mean who are their parents, what happened to the parents and what significance are the parents to the character and the story, and does the character have any siblings?
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Outlines in the forum Characters 10 years ago
Thank you, @mark-kimbaya! That was very helpful; same to you, @jess. By family, I mean who are their parents, what happened to the parents and what significance are the parents to the character and the story, and does the character have any siblings?
Jess, That has been added to the list! Thank you! -
Snapper replied to the topic Character Outlines in the forum Characters 10 years ago
Thank you, @mark-kimbaya! That was very helpful; same to you, @jess. By family, I mean who are their parents, what happened to the parents and what significance are the parents to the character and the story, and does the character have any siblings?
Jess, That has been added to the list! Thank you! -
Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@sarah-h I think I might be able to join you for a little bit if you’re still available.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Evil Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
I like it, @anne-of-lothlorien. However, I feel like something is missing. If you’re going for darker, then it needs to BE darker. (Ask someone more experienced with poetry for help there. 🙂 ) Right now I feel like it’s a little whimsical, and if that’s what you’re going for, great job! (You could use Daeus’s idea to make it even more so.)
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Structure and Character Arcs in the forum Characters 10 years ago
Hey everyone! Let me try tagging ya’ll @spradlin @theliterarycrusader @winter-rose @overcomer @jess @dragon-snapper @hope @aratrea @clairec @anna-brie @sarah-h
I’m seeing a lot of new faces. Not a lot of the people I used to interact with when the forum began, though. Kind of sad. And happy.
So it seems like people here like the Hero’s Journey,…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 10 years ago
@sarah-h 🙁 Oh well. I’m sure we will make contact again. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@sarah-h *rushes back from having tea* I will definitely be praying for both your brothers.
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ClaireC replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@sarah-h. I’ll pray for your family at this time.
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Mark Kamibaya replied to the topic Character Outlines in the forum Characters 10 years ago
What about family, @dragon-snapper ? Besides that I don’t see anything you’ve missed. It’s really great that you’re trying to make characters deeper, but if you want a truly deep character you have to separate characterization and character. Here’s a quote from Story by Robert McKee (the book is written for scriptwriters but it can apply to…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 10 years ago
@sarah-h I actually forgot about these lists. I’ll look at them tonight. (I was wondering what I’d be doing) Thanks for reminding me. Will you be around for writing in an hour and a half???
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BlueJay replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@sarah-h Yes, do. He’s back in??? Oh goody! 🙂 God is so faithful. You can tell your brother, that no enemy or problem is too big for God. And since he is fighting on the good side, God is right there beside him. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@sarah-h Yes, do. Praise the Lord that he’s back in. 🙂 God is so faithful. You can tell your brother, that no enemy or problem is too big for God. And since he is fighting on the good side, God is right there beside him. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@jess Awwww thanks. I think I need a break from my story anyway. *goes away eating icecream.* 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Hmm…I seem to have put temptation in peoples’ paths. Alright, you may have chips and chocolate even if you don’t write with me.
@jess Good luck with the studying. (You’ll need the chips to keep you going. Or do you like science?) 🙂 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Hmm…I seem to have put temptation in peoples’ paths. Alright, you may have chips and chocolate even if you don’t write with me.
@jess Good luck with the studying. (You’ll need the chips to keep you going. Or do like science?) 🙂 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@gretald Well, since you are getting over being sick you may have some. But not too much or you’ll make yourself sick again. *Reads post above again*
grabs all the chocolate
What about the other people who write with me, if anyone turns up????? *groans* Oh I’ll have to invest in some more.
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Greta replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@bluejay
Aww, man. I so wish I could, but I can’t right now. I have to go to bed early to get up early tomorrow, and I’m getting over being sick. 🙁 Hope you find some company, though! 🙂 Can I… *glances at chocolate*…y’know…have some…*inches toward chocolate*…chocolate? Even though I’m not writing with you? You’re so nice. *grabs…[Read more] -
BlueJay started the topic Types of Poetry in the forum Poetry 10 years ago
Okay, so I’m starting to explore poetry and the different types. The ones I have discovered, I have loved, but I’m sure that there are plenty more out there.
So this is where you can put every type of poetry. (with an example would be good).
Let me tag a few people to get this going:
@hislittlerose, @daeus, @winter-rose, @jess, @clairec, @kate-flou…[Read more] -
BlueJay started the topic Types of Poetry in the forum Poetry 10 years ago
Okay, so I’m starting to explore poetry and the different types. The ones I have discovered, I have loved, but I’m sure that there are plenty more out there.
So this is where you can put every type of poetry. (with an example would be good).
Let me tag a few people to get this going:
@hislittlerose, @daeus, @winter-rose, @jess, @clairec, @kate-flou…[Read more] - Load More
