Christine Eaton

@clairec Thanks. 🙂 It is a little bit hard to read, so I’m think of changing it, but I’m not sure what too. *surprise*

@sarah-h, That’s fabulous! It’s great to see God’s hand at work in your life, isn’t it? 🙂
@bluejay, love the profile pic! 🙂

@sarah-h Thanks. Maybe I’ll be brave…@daeus can you come and have a look at this poem? What do you think? Any critiques?

@sarah-h I will be praying. And that’s wonderful. The Lord is so faithful. 🙂

@sarah-h *crashes through door and gives you a good night hug.* 🙂 *gasps for joy* We were writing together!!??!! YES!!! *jumps for joy* *sneaks out of room quietly* 🙂 🙂 🙂

@sarah-h, I will definitely be praying for you! 🙂

@spradlin, don’t worry, I know you weren’t worried, it just reminded met that I hadn’t already mentioned it. 🙂
@kate-flournoy, Thank you! 🙂

@ClaireC with pleasure. 🙂

@Claire-C with pleasure. 🙂

Anne!!!! You came to KP!!! Oh my goodness why did you have to do it while I was on vacation I haven’t properly welcomed you and this is terrible oh dear!!
So first of all— WELCOME TO KINGDOM PEN, @ANNE-OF-LOTHLORIEN!!

Yes. So now that that’s out of the way… I really like your poem. I agree with the comments about the rhythm— it does seem to…[Read more]

Ooh, such a lovely topic! @Mark-Kamibaya thanks for starting it. I missed it initially because I’m on vacation and wifi is spotty, but you may rest assured I have not abandoned the forum. 😉
As for my favorite structure/arc… well, it really depends. I don’t think I have an absolute favorite. The two I primarily use are Hero’s Journey and…[Read more]

Gasp! @spradlin, Sorry! 🙂 I know you don’t really mind, but as a note that I forgot to mention at the beginning of the topic, If someone doesn’t tag you, don’t be offended. 🙂 *looks suspiciously at you* *suspicious look changes to one of concern* *runs over and thanks you* 😉

@daeus I’m going to go now. I wrote 160 words to one story and 138 on another. Thanks!

Psst @sarah-h Here’s the poem for the third list. Please feel free to critique. (just technically I think I did a terrible job, but….)

One day when I was gregarious,
And we were all being very rampageous,
An indigenous to Australia stood and said,
“I think that we are being loutish,
Or extremely ostentatious.
Perhaps we should be quiet
And b…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper It will be @daeus
@daeus I’m leaving now. Good-bye. I got a poem written, only I don’t think it’s very good, but never mind. *waves farewell*

@clairec Will do. 🙂

I’ll start.
I’m one of the crew for a Kid’s bible club at our church these school holidays (in Australia)
Among many things, I’m a small group leader, I’m playing Mary Magdalene in our skit (and I have the responsibility of presenting the gospel message in that) and I’m leading the memory verse on the guitar. Please pray that God would give me…[Read more]

@bluejay, wow! Thank you! 🙂