Christine Eaton

Write a story from the viewpoint of one of your siblings who enters a portal and ends up in a fantasy world where they have to cooperate with you in order to save the world.

@Daeus What an awful plight.

@graciegirl Okay, now I’m going to head out, but I rewrote round about 2000 words, which I am very happy with considering my various distractions. How’d your researching go?

@gracie Okay, now I’m going to head out, but I rewrote round about 2000 words, which I am very happy with considering my various distractions. How’d your researching go?

@graciegirl Alright! I’m still at it too! I’m rewriting.

@graciegirl Just checking..are you still there?

@kina-lamb @daeus @kate-flournoy @Jason @his-instrument @graciegirl @ethryndal @winter-rose @anyone else who sees this
Back again, yes. Asking for help….hesitantly I have come. But really, I never can decide whether I want to write from third person or first, so I need some dares in first person and others in third person to see if that’ll help…[Read more]

@winter-rose Glad you could join for a bit!

@r-j-wordsmith Awesome! The villain finally understood how to do things right here. *applauds*

@daeus Nice count! I copied down 4 pages worth of transitional phrases (because I really should use more of those) and logged all my characters.
@winter-rose @ethryndal @r-j-Anderson @northerner @graciegirl @Audrey-caylin @overcomer @jess @aella I’m still going.

@daeus Nice count! I copied down 4 pages worth of transitional phrases (because I really should use more of those) and logged all my characters.
@winter-rose @ethryndal @r-j-Anderson @northerner @graciegirl @Audrey-caylin @overcomer @jess @aella I’m still going.

@naomijackson Never to late to make goals. This topic has just begun. 😛
BTW, welcome to the forum!

@daeus I’m here!

Did you have anything to add on the descriptions, @Daeus?

@sierra-r wow, that’s great!!! Half of Luke, that’s a treasure.

During the summer, for the Bible Bee, each category Primary (age 7-10,) Junior (age 11-14) and Senior (age 15-18) memorize about 100 verses and study their discovery journal. At the end of the summer they all take a test and the top 120 to qualify for each category move up to the…[Read more]

@Ethryndal You totally deserve the free advertising.

Cassian. For sure. But Jyn and K2 close behind. (Don’t you love Cassian and K2’s relationship? It’s not specifically shown a ton, but it’s clearly observable and it’s sweet! I ‘specially love that part after they killed all those guys in the square or whatever, and K2 apologized for hitting…[Read more]

@I-J-Anderson That is incredible.

@Ethryndal *appreciates Galen Erso with you and heartily agrees with everything you said*

And guys, you need to see this picture she drew of Rogue One. It’s amazing.
I don’t think I can link to the picture by itself, so scroll down on the link till you come to it.

Btw @Ethryndal, was K2 your favorite? 😉

@R-J-Wordsmith I LOVE THIS. 😮 All of it! It’s hilarious and riddled with twisted cliches. Only ‘corrective’ things to say—here.

“Your Majesty” I said, panting for breath—there should be a comma after the spoken line

“My loyal subject.” He boomed.—same here—comma, not period

“Arise sir Ootchacha—should ‘sir’ be capitaliz…

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Okay, @Northerner, first of all, we need to talk about the theme and the incredible use of symbolism. At first I thought it was going to be a fairly normal story about an atheist and a Catholic who challenged each other to a duel and it was eventually going to end up one converting the other (no prizes for guessing who. 😉 ) and then with them…[Read more]

@Northerner I have no idea where my first post went. Here. Have it again.

Okay guys.
@Hope gave me a book with three of G.K. Chesterton’s novels in it as an early birthday present, and though I have only read one of them so far it completely blew my mind.
It was The Ball and the Cross.

Has anyone else read it? If so, can we please discuss how…[Read more]