@christi-eaton
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Aha. I see what you did there. @f5a8c3e92
Twelve definitely grew on me after awhile. I’m excited (and sad) to see what happens over the course of Season 10…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
That isn’t the word I’d use, but alright. I won’t argue with you (this time). *grins*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Ugh. Yes. Almost unbearably so. @gracie-girl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Oi, if you want to put up with Nine and Rose, that’s fine with me, you can have both of them. @hope
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
The “Impossible Girl” will probably have a different take on which Doctor to start with than I… @gracie-girl
@f5a8c3e92 Are you a fan of Twelve?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
*coughs* @hope See the explanation above.
Ten is great, don’t get me wrong. I don’t actually like Nine, but maybe that’s just me…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
I don’t know. I blame Moffat… @hope
@gracie-girl Yep, Hope is definitely right. That’s why i suggested the Eleventh Doctor first. Nine and Ten can be cheesy, but Eleven is easier to bond with as a character.
I started off with Eleven, and by the time I got the the Doctor’s earlier incarnations, I was so in love with the show that I didn’t…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Um. It is. Definitely.
Fair warning, though, the seasons don’t run as a typical TV shows’ seasons do, they’re sectioned based on the actor playing the Doctor at the time.
I’d start with the Eleventh Doctor, Matt Smith’s version. He (technically) has 3 seasons: Season 5, Season 6, Season 7A, and Season 7B.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Me too! I prefer Doctor Who, but Sherlock is just SO. GOOD. @hope @f5a8c3e92 @gracie-girl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
There’s nothing wrong with bein a feeler @hope
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Wow. @daeus
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Did you just…quote what I think you quoted? @f5a8c3e92
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 welcome to the club. *cackles*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Do not underestimate the power of the INFP…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 I didn’t see that you’d tagged me in this until just now, sorry!
All in all, I really like this excerpt. Generally, it ready pretty well, and flows pretty smoothly, but there are a couple of grammatical issues, although I’m sure someone better at this than I has already pointed them out.
In the prologue, the pacing is a little slow,…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Daeus *dreamily contemplates the infinite*
fyi… I really did write that down…
HA! *curtsies* Excepting the king himself, of course.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 I’ll critique this as soon as I have enough time to give it a thorough read. It looks interesting. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 *scandalized gasp* FIRST RULE OF SURVIVAL AROUND HERE— ALWAYS—! (No…) NEVER! MOCK! KING! DAEUS!
XD
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 shhhh!! Don’t spill the beans! XD
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Not if the INFPs have anything to say about it… *grins*
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